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Peer Review: A37407161 - Fingers the game

Post 1

BeowulfShaffer

Entry: Fingers the game - A37407161
Author: BeowulfSchaeffer - U10890736

This is my second entery and I hope it will go down well


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Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Beowulf. I have to admit that I don't understand this game the way you have described it. For a start there are places where you seem to have put in the wrong word, making it hard to figure out what you intended to say. Secondly, the sentences are far too long. Try:

1. reading what you have written very carefully. Read it out loud slowly and listen to what you are saying.

2. splitting long sentences into shorter ones.

3. use a capital A and B, or better still to make it more real, play the game between Alice and Bob. Then you won't need the footnote about him and her.

How are things at the centre of the galaxy?


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Post 3

Cyzaki

Let me see if I understand.

smiley - starBoth players start with one finger on each hand

smiley - starThey take it in turns to point one of their hands at one of their opponent's hands

smiley - starIf someone points a hand with 3 (say) fingers at one of your hands, you add that number of fingers to your hand

smiley - starWhen you have 5 fingers on one hand, you make a fist

smiley - starIf one hand is a fist and the other has an even number of fingers, you can move half the fingers to the fist rather than pointing on your go

smiley - starYou can't point with a fist

smiley - starIf both your hands become fists, you lose

Is that right?


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Post 4

BeowulfShaffer

do you mind if I just use your explantion Cyzaki its probably the clearest I've heard.


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Post 5

Cyzaki

Well, you could, but then it won't really be your entry. How about you try to rewrite it a little clearer but in your own words?


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Post 6

BeowulfShaffer

I could add you to the researchers list if you want if not I can try to rewrite it but I have explained several times in real life and don't seem to be to good at ir.


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Post 7

Cyzaki

It's up to you whether you add me to the list and use my explanation, or rewrite it in your own words. Either way is fine by me smiley - smiley

smiley - panda


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Post 8

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

I agree with Gnomon smiley - smiley Please re-read what you have written.

There are other points I'd like to make to:

I wonder whether you should rephrase that first sentence and have America before Truman elementary school.

Century has a capitalised C

Be aware of repeating words ...you shouldn't do that

I wonder whether there are other games with fingers that you could add to this making a bigger Entry.

smiley - goodluck


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Post 9

Gnomon - time to move on

You don't need to put a capital c on century except when you are giving the number of the century:

this is a good century
this is the 21st Century

That's a House Rule, by the way, rather than a general rule of English. Other publishing companies may use different rules.


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Post 10

Gnomon - time to move on

Has anyone studied this game mathematically? Is there a winning strategy? (That is, is there a method you can use for always winning?)


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Post 11

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

smiley - ta Gnomon


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Post 12

BeowulfShaffer

As far as I know there has not been any mathmatical analis of fingers. I made some changes and added cy to the resaerchers list but that didn't seem to work quite right. I am now listed as an editor with him as the researcher.


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Post 13

Cyzaki

Cyzaki is a she smiley - biggrin

And it'll all sort itself out once this is edited - then both names will be researchers and the editor will be the editor. It's just a quirk of the system.

smiley - panda


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Post 14

BeowulfShaffer

ok sorry about that I sorta suspected but didn't see any clear signs and I have found that it for some reason most women get less upest about being called he than men do when called she


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Post 15

Cyzaki

No worries, I can be pretty blokish at times! smiley - biggrin

smiley - panda


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Post 16

Cyzaki

You're missing a lot of full stops from the explanation, and you might want to change the wording a bit as I was writing in short bullet points and you're writing it as a paragraph.

smiley - panda


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Post 17

BeowulfShaffer

I rearranged the rules section so it is now a list of rules which I think is better that the previous format. I did save the old guide ML just in case I'm wrong.


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Post 18

Cyzaki

You can use tags to make a list, like so:

Point one
Point two
.
.
.
Last point

Also, does it have to be a two player game? Couldn't you play it with more people, and the last one to not have two fists wins?

smiley - panda


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Post 19

BeowulfShaffer

I know it as a two player game but I guess more could work.


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Post 20

BeowulfShaffer

I changed the list format too. Is everything else ok?


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