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Peer Review: A37407161 - Fingers the game
BeowulfShaffer Started conversation Jul 3, 2008
Entry: Fingers the game - A37407161
Author: BeowulfSchaeffer - U10890736
This is my second entery and I hope it will go down well
A37407161 - Fingers the game
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 7, 2008
Hi Beowulf. I have to admit that I don't understand this game the way you have described it. For a start there are places where you seem to have put in the wrong word, making it hard to figure out what you intended to say. Secondly, the sentences are far too long. Try:
1. reading what you have written very carefully. Read it out loud slowly and listen to what you are saying.
2. splitting long sentences into shorter ones.
3. use a capital A and B, or better still to make it more real, play the game between Alice and Bob. Then you won't need the footnote about him and her.
How are things at the centre of the galaxy?
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Cyzaki Posted Jul 7, 2008
Let me see if I understand.
Both players start with one finger on each hand
They take it in turns to point one of their hands at one of their opponent's hands
If someone points a hand with 3 (say) fingers at one of your hands, you add that number of fingers to your hand
When you have 5 fingers on one hand, you make a fist
If one hand is a fist and the other has an even number of fingers, you can move half the fingers to the fist rather than pointing on your go
You can't point with a fist
If both your hands become fists, you lose
Is that right?
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 7, 2008
do you mind if I just use your explantion Cyzaki its probably the clearest I've heard.
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Cyzaki Posted Jul 7, 2008
Well, you could, but then it won't really be your entry. How about you try to rewrite it a little clearer but in your own words?
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 8, 2008
I could add you to the researchers list if you want if not I can try to rewrite it but I have explained several times in real life and don't seem to be to good at ir.
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Cyzaki Posted Jul 8, 2008
It's up to you whether you add me to the list and use my explanation, or rewrite it in your own words. Either way is fine by me
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Jul 8, 2008
I agree with Gnomon Please re-read what you have written.
There are other points I'd like to make to:
I wonder whether you should rephrase that first sentence and have America before Truman elementary school.
Century has a capitalised C
Be aware of repeating words ...you shouldn't do that
I wonder whether there are other games with fingers that you could add to this making a bigger Entry.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 8, 2008
You don't need to put a capital c on century except when you are giving the number of the century:
this is a good century
this is the 21st Century
That's a House Rule, by the way, rather than a general rule of English. Other publishing companies may use different rules.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 8, 2008
Has anyone studied this game mathematically? Is there a winning strategy? (That is, is there a method you can use for always winning?)
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Jul 8, 2008
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 8, 2008
As far as I know there has not been any mathmatical analis of fingers. I made some changes and added cy to the resaerchers list but that didn't seem to work quite right. I am now listed as an editor with him as the researcher.
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Cyzaki Posted Jul 8, 2008
Cyzaki is a she
And it'll all sort itself out once this is edited - then both names will be researchers and the editor will be the editor. It's just a quirk of the system.
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 8, 2008
ok sorry about that I sorta suspected but didn't see any clear signs and I have found that it for some reason most women get less upest about being called he than men do when called she
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Cyzaki Posted Jul 13, 2008
You're missing a lot of full stops from the explanation, and you might want to change the wording a bit as I was writing in short bullet points and you're writing it as a paragraph.
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 13, 2008
I rearranged the rules section so it is now a list of rules which I think is better that the previous format. I did save the old guide ML just in case I'm wrong.
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Cyzaki Posted Jul 13, 2008
You can use tags to make a list, like so:
Point one
Point two
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Last point
Also, does it have to be a two player game? Couldn't you play it with more people, and the last one to not have two fists wins?
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 14, 2008
I know it as a two player game but I guess more could work.
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BeowulfShaffer Posted Jul 17, 2008
I changed the list format too. Is everything else ok?
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Peer Review: A37407161 - Fingers the game
- 1: BeowulfShaffer (Jul 3, 2008)
- 2: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 7, 2008)
- 3: Cyzaki (Jul 7, 2008)
- 4: BeowulfShaffer (Jul 7, 2008)
- 5: Cyzaki (Jul 7, 2008)
- 6: BeowulfShaffer (Jul 8, 2008)
- 7: Cyzaki (Jul 8, 2008)
- 8: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Jul 8, 2008)
- 9: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 8, 2008)
- 10: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 8, 2008)
- 11: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Jul 8, 2008)
- 12: BeowulfShaffer (Jul 8, 2008)
- 13: Cyzaki (Jul 8, 2008)
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- 16: Cyzaki (Jul 13, 2008)
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