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oht3lv Started conversation Feb 4, 2006
What are "IOL" operations?
The introduction needs some work. "A long time ago a boy..." sounds like a fairy tale. But Dr. Sharma is still alive, correct? So it wasn't that long ago. Give specific dates.
I suggest sticking to the facts--Dr Sharma was educated in England. He established an orphanage and hospital to care for underpriviledged children in his homeland.
The statistics are impressive.
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LadyKaterina Posted Feb 5, 2006
Thank you so much. I will definitely consider your comments!
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