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Peer Review: A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 1

U218534

Entry: King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK - A3718938
Author: Joe C (Sub) - did someone call for a medic? smiley - smiley - U218534

See also Collaborative Writing Workshop thread attached to this entry smiley - smiley


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 2

Woodpigeon

Hi Joe,

This is a really excellent entry. I know KL quite well, as I have visited it quite a lot in recent times through work. You have painted a very comprehensive picture of the town. It's a quiet town for its size but the local people are very friendly.

One little tidbit which I learned recently was that the "lynn" in Kings Lynn is old celtic word for "pool". In Ireland, the "lin" in the city of Dublin has exactly the same origins. Dublin = Black Pool.

I would wholeheartedly agree with you regarding the roundabout. What a job. Isn't it spelt "Hardwick"?

Is the correct spelling "Wagn" railway, or Wagon railway?

Sandringham is down the road a bit - doesn't Princess Diana have some connection with the town? Went to school there or something?

Anyway - it's good stuff. You shouldn't have a problem getting this into the Edited Guide.

Cheers,

smiley - peacedoveWoodpigeon


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 3

Skankyrich [?]

Superb smiley - ok

Just two tiny things, both in the first paragraph - should 'southeast' be 'south-east'? And I think you need a footnote to explain to any foreign types (i.e. us westcountry folk) what 'borough status' means practically.

Apart from that, a blinder!

smiley - cheers


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 4

U218534

Eek, Hardwick is correct, just a typo smiley - smiley

But Wagn is correct, not Wagon - it stands for West Anglia Great Northern.

I'm not sure about Sandringham, but Diana's primary school was on Gayton Road in Gaywood. It was in the local press quite a bit recently because it closed down for Christmas and never re-opened due to lack of funds; and I think it was the only private school left in Lynn. There was talk of the parents getting together to re-open it with a board of governers, but I haven't heard anything more since. Worth a mention, do you think?

On the southeast/south-east point: it seems that there isn't a definitive answer on this. There doesn't seem to be an answer on the Sub-editors' Style page, and I've asked various people and received all sorts of answers. Typing 'south-east' into Microsoft Word results in it being flagged up as a grammar mistake, and it suggests 'southeast'; but correcting it to the latter results in it being flagged up as a spelling mistake, and it suggests 'south-east'! smiley - headhurts

And I'll see if I can put something together about Boroughs smiley - smiley


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 5

U218534

Um.

I've written 'A borough is an administrative district, encompassing various Town and Parish Councils, and itself encompassed by the County Council.' But that doesn't seem to really explain it properly... And where do District Councils fit into it all?

Sorry, you can see that local government isn't my strong point! smiley - biggrin


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 6

Kat - From H2G2

I think after you say..."southeast of The Wash"..or whatever it is smiley - blush you should probably say, "in Norfolk". I know it says Norfolk in the title of it could make confusion and thought that Lynn is in the southeast of England...which would be odd.

I shall return with the giant Peer Review notepad at some point to prod this properly.smiley - smiley


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 7

Skankyrich [?]

She's off again, wait for it smiley - winkeye


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 8

U218534

She's already been prodding it in CWW smiley - tongueout


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 9

Spiff


Oh, hiya

If I'd spotted this in the CWW I might have prodded it a little myself, but better late than never!

Just one little thing for the time being: The Linnets website has changed!

The one you link to is frozen in time back in about November 04 (smiley - yikes); the new one is at www.thelinnets.co.uk

or is it .com?

I'm sure you'll work it out, smiley - winkeye

Back for more when I find some time to read it more closely

spiff


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 10

U218534

smiley - biggrin Ta, that's changed.


A3718938 - King's Lynn, Norfolk, UK

Post 11

U168592

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HF
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Post 13

Woodpigeon

Well done Joe! smiley - applause


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Post 14

U218534

Woo! smiley - biggrin


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Post 15

Skankyrich [?]

smiley - bubbly Nice one Joe!


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