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Entry: Piñatas - A3703475
Author: broelan - with bun - U155058

A Flea Market rescue, I think I've addressed all the points in the original thread. I still need to plug in some links, I know there's one to Pass the Parcel around here somewhere...

Original entry: A2661716
Original PR thread: F1820588?thread=425611

Cool salvaging broelan. It looks EG bound to me.

If I was forced to make a comment I would say the title could reveal a bit more, like 'Pinatas - The spanish bashing game' or 'Pnatas - The party game'. I am sure there are better ideas for a title than those I suggested...

HELL

The original title was 'Everything You Need to Know About Party Pinatas'. I thought it could be trimmed down a bit .

Perhaps I've trimmed too much, I'll consider alternatives.

Thanks for having a look

*nods in agreement with Hell on the matter of the title*

Other than that this is a fantastic entry !

Apart from the title, flawless. Makes me wonder why it takes a week just to sort out my punctuation....

Okay, I've amended the title to 'Pinata - A Party Game', and while casting about for ideas of how to change the title I came across directions for making your own pinata, so I included them as well. Is poster board the same thing in the UK as it is in the US?

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Good work broelan. I'm glad to see this one get into the Edited Guide.

Yay!
Thanks, everyone, for your help