A Conversation for Judo: Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics

Peer Review: A36660882 - Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics

Post 1

kuzushi

Entry: Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics - A36660882
Author: KZ - the abbreviation formerly known as WG - U8183342

This has been worked on for a while, with help from B'Elana and Optical Illusion, and Simetra and Loftyskywalker


A36660882 - Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics

Post 2

McKay The Disorganised

Well done KZ, obviously a labour of love.

I'm afraid that a lot of the links didn't work for me, but other than that I have nothing but praise.

smiley - cider


A36660882 - Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics

Post 3

kuzushi

Hey, thank you very much smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Cyzaki

I don't think you need the first sentence about the lead-up to the Beijing Olympics - that will become out of date very quickly and it doesn't really add anything.

smiley - panda


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Post 5

kuzushi


Fair point. I've snipped that bit now.
















At the time of writingJune 2008 we are coming up to the Olympic Games in Beijing.


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Post 6

U168592

What's a-happening here, any more work being done?


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Post 7

kuzushi



Well, I've kind of reached a bit of an impasse really.


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Post 8

U168592

oh.

Need any help to hurdle over the difficulties?


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Post 9

kuzushi


Any help you could give would be most welcome.

smiley - smiley


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Post 10

Cyzaki

What sort of help are you after?

smiley - panda


A36660882 - Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics

Post 11

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hello KraZyWG smiley - smiley

How is this Entry coming along?

GB
Scout


A36660882 - Kuzushi, Jigoro Kano and the Olympics

Post 12

kuzushi


Hi Galaxy Babe.

Well, it could do with a bit of tidying up.
I've reached a bit of a stalemate really.


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Post 13

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

If you are happy with the content then the sub-ed can do the tidying up. However, if you mean the article needs more work then it must stay in PR smiley - smiley

If you could clarify the situation it makes it easier for the Scouts at picking time smiley - ok

GB
Scout


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Post 14

kuzushi


OK.

I think I should do just a little bit more work on it, perhaps some references to Beijing 2008, and then it'll be finished.


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Post 15

kuzushi


I've done as much as I feel able to do.
I've added a bit about Beijing 2008. That's it from me.


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Post 16

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Excellent, thank you, and very well timedsmiley - ok

smiley - run


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Post 19

kuzushi


Hurrah!


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