h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Fronts, Depressions and Anticyclones - A33894778
Author: laconian - U1477064

My 30th submission to PR

There are a couple of things I'd especially like feedback on:

First, is it clear enough? I have linked to diagrams, but ideally it should be comprehensible without them, so can you visualise what I am describing? No point putting something in the EG that no one can understand .

Second, the diagrams. Some of them are especially useful and make things clearer. At the moment I've buried them in the text and just made some words into links, but I'm wondering whether I shouldn't say it more explicitly, ie. 'See this diagram' or something. It interrupts the flow a bit, but some of them really are worth looking at. So what do the PRers think?

I think I had one too many tonight to do this justice. It looks thorough and am sure will be useful for them as don't understand what the gorgeous bird reading the forecast is saying, but couldn't care less. Some scouty-type will snap this up sooner than later.I would like to add, hooraywell done on the 30th *slaps back* and lines up and here's to the next 30

This is very interesting - I remember hardly any of this from the lessons we had in school. It made sense to me - so you must have expressed it clearly.

I like this entry. It's very informative and makes for compelling reading.

Thanks for the feedback . What do you think about the diagrams? Should I draw attention to them more in the text?

I don't see any pictures

confused opti

That's what I mean . They are in the links in the text, but I think they are quite beneficial so it might be better to draw attention to the fact they are there.

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Hmm, I'm quite keen to make a couple of changes here actually. Now, if I make changes to this entry now, will the sub-ed get the 'new', updated copy? I presume so .

No, don't change this. Wait until the sub-ed has been assigned and then liaise with them.

By the way:

Brilliant Entry

Keep an eye on A34944582 - that's the one that will be assigned to sub. Also ComingUp which is a little backlogged at the moment

Thanks GB . Yes, I noticed ComingUp's a little full. Are lots of the sub-eds busy? I'd volunteer myself but it's exams season in uni.

The sub-ed forum is rather quiet, but I don't know what they're doing. Busy RL I guess

I'm trying to get to grips with a Uni project, then I've got Newton Poppleford to finish, and by then I might have another Uni project to Sub. I don't have many 'normal' allocations these days

Sounds like the life of a sub-ed is a busy one!

how's about that then guys and gals? Subbie checking in, up to you laconian we can either do this here, or somewhere more private