h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

With all due respect to you ,Opticalillusion - media mynx life would be boring without hiccups, I've suggested some of your points already, not all just some.
Perhaps a quick read of the replies might be of some help to your corrections.

If you drink Tea then I'd imagine you would be well aware of what 'steeping' is, but you may well be right(I'm not a Tea drinker).

As a first Entry this is a bit rough round the edges but it's getting there Beo' and as I said before it makes me want to visit the 'Wired Coffee Shop'.

Cheers.

Steeping is what it is called when you stick the tealeaves into the water then let the stuff in the leaves that makes tea taste like tea seep into the water.
I have never been able to get a good explation for why the wired thing is only avalible in summer it just is.

For some reason the link to the entry on tea won't work does any one know why?

both for those snippets of info

Your tea link isn't working as the Guide ml code is not written correctly. It should be:

tea

Entry: Wired Coffee - A31444788
Author: BeowulfShaffer - U10890736

I fixed the link and think I will ask more directly about the wired thing next time I am up there.

too much. Just the way I see things is that by questioning things you may have a fuller entry.

With all due respect to Opti, the Guide ML should be:

tea

with *no* white spaces, thanks

I think we all agree that we don't want Beo to get bogged down in quibbles about the correct position of a footnote.

I think it's fine to post major things for Beo to correct. If that's not possible, it's still fine to leave things as a *note to sub-ed* in case this gets recommended (Which I hope it will once it is finished.

I like the description of the Wired Coffee, I have a good image of it now.

The Wired Thing contains gelato - which I guess is ice cream?

Now ice cream is usually associated with summer, so maybe that is the reason? If you do find out, add the information; if you can't find out, I guess it would be fine to speculate a bit - but make clear it is only a speculation.

I see were you are going with the gelato angle but the thing is they serve other gelato products year round. I think that they may order the wired thing premade from a food factory which may have some thing to do with it but if that is so why don't they just order more or start making it on site their is a pretty good markert for it.

If they order it pre made, they'll have to consider 'best before' dates, and it may be a seasonal product where they order it. Like with Christmas and Easter choc, maybe. We have to order our Christmas products in August/September, and the Easter products in December.

Is their anything else I need to do I haven't heard anything on this thread for a while and don't really know if there is anything left to change.

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WEll done, Beowulf, congratulations!

Lets get down and groovy

Woo-hoo!

*chalks up #1 for BeowulfShaffer*

<--- not Kopi Luwak

yay!!!