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Entry: The Dave Matthews Band - A2866917
Author: Miloso - U224935

One of my more insignificant faults is that I'm impatient - so I've taken this out of Writing Workshop and put it here instead.

I have taken this from the Flea Market: F74125?thread=125352 and elaborated just a bit. Mr Carrot took this originally, made a few improvements and didn't have time to finish so I took over from there. The other authors credited have also written entries which contained legitimate information so they've been credited more or less because it can't be proven that I didn't take information from them (although I didn't).

This is finished but I have a couple of concerns:

The first is that I haven't attempted to write about a band before and I'm not sure if my structure works for anyone other than me. I just need to know if it seems to flow alright and make sense in the order it's in.

The other is that for lack of anything more creative I've used song titles as headers and subheaders. The result is that the title of a section is only loosely related to content; but my primary purpose was to break up the text. To this end I don't know if I should italicise the titles, put them in quotemarks or leave them as they are.

Thanks in advance to all passer-by

I'll probably be away for a few days, but I thought I'd bump this up before leaving so I can come back to lots of lovely comments

um, as far as song titles are concerned I don't think you have to italicise or quote them, but an Editor could tell you more. I like the Entry, it's an easy read and I now want to take more of a listen to them. The only typo I found on first scan was Platinium - Platinum in the footnotes...
I'll give it a closer inspection when I have more time...
PGHF

Thanks!

Fixed

Okay, I was going to wait until tomorrow to bump this up, but I'd found an error and fixed it and figured while I was here....

I had stated that all DVDs were multi-region encoded. They are all *available* that way, but a majority of the ones around are Region 1 (even on Amazon UK, I was quite surprised).

**bump**

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