A Conversation for The Dave Matthews Band

Writing Workshop: A2866917 - The Dave Matthews Band

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Milos

Entry: The Dave Matthews Band - A2866917
Author: Miloso - U224935

I have taken this from the Flea Market: F74125?thread=125352 and elaborated just a bit. Mr Carrot took this originally, made a few improvements and didn't have time to finish so I took over from there. The other authors credited have also written entries which contained legitimate information so they've been credited more or less because it can't be proven that I didn't take information from them (although I didn't).

This is finished but I'm starting here instead of PR for two reasons.

The first is that I haven't attempted to write about a band before and I'm not sure if my structure works for anyone other than me. I just need to know if it seems to flow alright and make sense in the order it's in.

The other is that for lack of anything more creative I've used song titles as headers and subheaders. The result is that the title of a section is only loosely related to content; but my primary purpose was to break up the text. To this end I don't know if I should italicise the titles, put them in quotemarks or leave them as they are.

I know this forum doesn't get visited as often as PR and I really don't want to leave this here any longer than necessary, so if I don't gather any comments in a day or so I'll assume it's okay as-is and pop it into PR smiley - ok

Thanks in advance to all passer-by smiley - cheers


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