h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

This is the first line of feedback. If you spot anything strange or can think of clearer or more concise wording, I want to hear it. I want to know what people think, is it too technical? How can I make the subject more accessible? let me know please. even an opinion can be useful.

also make that "better" or more varied wording, and my guideML needs work, oh ye experts out there.

HI!
Wow - nice "how-to" ... I don't think it's too techincal, but maybe a bit dry. A little history of the dance in the intro would be nice, and some name-dropping; famous dancers & movies that have featured dancers; for example, Gregory Hines stared out just dancing, and went on to do a lot of great acting.

I LOVE tap dance, I'm glad someone is writing about it!

hmmm. difficult. i don't want too much article, and can always write that one later when i'm (hopefully) a better writer.

No suggestions to make. Just wanted to say though, that it tok me right back to my early teens when I took tap dancing classes and performed on stage a few times. I'd love to go back to it for fun but I now have arthritis in my foot so I can't! sniff!!! Just have to be content with watching films like the Cotton Club and old Fred and Ginger movies.

Thanks though.

spidey