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Entry: Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991 - A27653079
Author: Milos - U224935

Dredged this up from the Flea Market. The original PR thread is here:
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Neat

A couple of prominent mispellings. Cliff Richard not Richards, and it's ZeppElin.

Westfield School's about a mile from where I am now, btw.

I was going to say that Joe Elliott wasn't an original member but I checked and seems he was. Dunno where I got that from.

Hi Milos, this is a great rescue

The dates in the title, at first glance - look to me like he was 13 years old when he died I'd much rather the dates were (1960 - 91) and then you can put the date he joined the band in the text.

A695405 - Alcohol Abuse

Small house-style change:

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Thanks for this, not my kind of music so I didn't know this person, but it serves as (another) warning about mixing alcohol with drugs and the toxic effect it has on a body.

Richard and Zeppelin - done.

I thought about the date thing, too, and just hadn't decided what to do with it. I thought about removing it entirely, which would make the title similar to the authors companion piece on Rick Allen, but then Rick Allen isn't dead.

I've changed it to 1960-1991, but to the uninitiated that may make it look like those were the dates he was with the band (newcomers to the site may not be familiar with our format), so now I'm considering dropping the 'Def Leppard Guitarist' bit. Any thoughts?

I'll get the link in there somewhere.

Thanks, guys!

Steve Clark (1960 - 91) - Def Leppard Guitarist

maybe?

Okay, that works.

Hi Milos, I have nothing to add so I'll just leave this link:

respiration failure = A27019505

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Well done, good rescue

Thanks!