A Conversation for Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991
Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A8757381 - Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991
LeppardStalker - Keeper of the Copyrights Started conversation Jan 24, 2006
Entry: Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991 - A8757381
Author: LeppardStalker - Keeper of the Copyrights - U1598392
Hi everyone!
This is only the second time I've put something in Writing Workshop. I want to eventually put this up for Peer Review, and I would like some general feedback about it. I'm especially concerned with the introduction and conclusion... I was never very good at those!
Thanks,
LeppardStalker
A8757381 - Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991
LeppardStalker - Keeper of the Copyrights Posted Feb 2, 2006
Anyone? I promise it's not that bad...
A8757381 - Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991
SuperBlondie Posted Feb 7, 2006
OK, in the third paragraph "know" shoule be changed to "knew". Also, I don't think you should put Steve Steamin Clark in the beginning AND end. Sounds better in the beginning, so change the end to Steamin Steve or something like that. Oh, and "Lightening" is actually spelled "Lightning". Other than that it's pretty good!
A8757381 - Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991
AlexAshman Posted Jan 27, 2007
Author has elvised - out of Writing Workshop and into Flea Market?
A8757381 - Steve Clark - Def Leppard Guitarist 1978 - 1991
AlexAshman Posted Jan 29, 2007
This Entry has been seconded (F43882?thread=3835955) and has been added to a list of Writing Workshop removals. The Entry will hopefully be removed shortly, after which it will be submitted to the FleaMarket.
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