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Peer Review: A25605209 - How To Cure Seasickness

Post 1

swl

Entry: How To Cure Seasickness - A25605209
Author: SWL™ ' - U1775547

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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


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Now I'm in trouble, that woke Hubby up! smiley - blush


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Post 3

U168592

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Well, yes.

Perhaps a little succint.

What sort of tree? Should it be one that has a bird's nest in it?

Fruit? (because of the dangers of discovering gravity)

Oh, and I'm sure you could add some links smiley - tongueout


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Post 4

h5ringer

A good example of the post-modern penta-syllablic form. You need to make it clearer, though. Is it:

*Sit* under a tree

Sit *under* a tree

Sit under *a* tree, or

Sit under a *tree*

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Post 5

Deek

Or even:

get off the boat!

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Post 6

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Don't set sail!

I mentioned mal-de-mer in my recent 42 Uses for Sawdust entry, and someone asked for the translation, while it was in PR.
I think "mal-de-mer" is more commonly used than (the term) seasickness, because seasick could mean you're sick of the sight of the sea (if you live by the seasidesmiley - tongueout) and mal-de-mer literally means "sickness of the sea" so really, you should think about changing the title. smiley - nahnah

This would be a doddle to sub, methinks.


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Post 7

AlexAshman


Links:

A250381 - Lateral Thinking
A2181719 - The Sea
A273179 - Water
A284492 - The Tree and its Uses
A930179 - Relaxation Techniques
A103140 - Hangover Cures
A3866006 - A Guide to Selecting, Taming and Training a Budgie to Talk


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Post 8

swl

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Four words.

3 questions
4 grammar suggestions
7 links

What the heck would happen to "Mostly Harmless" in PR?

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Post 9

U168592

Ah...see, that's already gone through PR. It was 'Harmless'.


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Post 10

AlexAshman


Oh and A17808870smiley - biggrin


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Post 11

swl

Budgies smiley - huh


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Post 12

swl

No no no, not the squirrels smiley - run


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Post 13

swl

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Post 14

AlexAshman


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Mr. Dreadful - But really I'm not actually your friend, but I am...

Should you choose to expand the Entry it may be worth noting that this was Spike Milligan's favoured method.


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Post 16

aka Bel - A87832164

Love it, SWL. Let us now when you've dealt with all the suggestions made so far. smiley - ok


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Post 17

swl

Ah, Spine Maligna, that well-known typing error. It's quite possible that's where I first came across this.


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Post 18

McKay The Disorganised

And alas it doesn't always work - I've been on a ship with trees on it - in pots.

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Post 19

swl

Well I'm sorry, a tree in a pot is a pot-plant and the fact that your sea-sickness wasn't cured is further proof of this.

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Post 20

AlexAshman


You've got an added space after the A-number of the first link - it needs removing.


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