h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Egg Salad - A2492723
Author: Zerrett87 - U684222

good eating...


why do u have Flea market???
kinda american like

First of all let me say that this entry is in DIRE need of an overhaul, your spelling punctuation and grammar leave less to be desired than your subject matter.

Secondly, your formatting is way off kilter. You do not need 4 carriage returns/line breaks between sections at all.

Thirdly, the comment about passing of wind or 'farts' as you rather unpleasantly put it is neither necessary nor funny.

I would suggest that you give this entire entry to your shredder and try again, I can appreciate the spelling if you're Dyslexic but if not it's clear you've spent next to no time on it. The whole point of putting things into peer review is to get them prepped for the guide but that does involve some work from the creator of said items - that being yourself - before hand to make them at the very least legible!

Suffice it to say I am unimpressed. I leave the matter in your hands to remedy as you see fit.

~*LM*~ ... Offering a harsh but fair critique.

"i know my spelling suck but i have other things to worry about."

Well, if you want to write for the Edited Guide, you'll need to worry about it a whole lot more. If you're dyslexic we can work around that. If you're not, then you really need to polish up both your spelling and grammar. You'll also need to read both of these h2g2 pages Writing-Beginners and Writing-Guidelines

If you want to see what an edited entry with egg content should look like, have a butchers at any of these:

A738641 Salad Recipes
A592481 How to Boil an Egg
A533792 The Egg Cream
A575750 How to Separate Eggs
A1124641 Sherried Eggs
A545636 Chocolate Easter Eggs
A105788 Scrambled Eggs
A219962 Cooking Poached Eggs
A251038 Storing Eggs
A283349 Havana Style Eggs - 'Huevos Habaneros'


Scout

This was painful to read.

So many spelling mistakes.

A tip to you Zerret87 - spell checker!

2/3

Thanks I know of the other "EGG" recipies but none of them are for what I was typing about. But I do admit to the bad grammar and spelling. I also apolagize for the "fart" joke I didn't mean for it offend anybody.

I have unsubscribe from this so nomore post