h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Roman Road: Construction - A23968876
Author: Bob Stafford (Keeper of The Treacle Shadow) - U3151547

Please rivew and comment.

Bob...

Bob, have you seen this before you started writing: A1283122

Oh, and then there is this one, too: A3473967

I'm not sure your entry does add all that much to those two.

Yes I hoped it was more construction than the general (and very good) descriptive entry that A1283122 is. The aim is detail in the building and construction.

Are they too similar in your opinion I did not think so please comment this is what PR is all about and shal not be at all ofended if this needs altering, go for it...

If I'm honest, I'd say that what you write is covered in the other two entries.
Let's wait what the others say, ok?

I wanted to fill in detail missing in the others I had hoped to cover ground the others missed or covered briefly.

I will leave it to the others as suggested and hope the entry is unique enough (or made to be). Thanks for your comments and interest...

That's fine with me.

Thanks for keeping me straight it is appreciated

That's what PR is for. Maybe others will have a different viewpoint. I see that you and fluffywhatsit have done lots of work on this.

I wanted to polih this as much as poss prior to PR
And fluffywhatsit (AKA fluffykerfuffle) was brilliant and as a new member the input was fantastic, I am very glad I accepted the proofreading offer, and will definatly accept her help again, help.

It definitely improved the entry!

fluffykerfuffle is a wonderful team member

That's the magic of hootoo

You are so right

Any more comments please...

Bob, would you consider updating the other entries? I don't think this one can stand on its own if you take out the duplication.
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Yes I will consider it, I will have a good think

Thought more on what to do with this one Bob?

Yes either enlarge it being careful to avoid duplication, or add chunks of it to entries on Roman roads as in the Foss way in PR at the moment.

The latter sounds like the best course of action, a nice complement to your Watling Street Entry and the tooly one