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Peer Review: A2290411 - The Cnidaria

Post 1

Vic

Entry: The Cnidaria - A2290411
Author: Vic - U182771

Haven't written an article in ages but i was writing an essay on the same topic and realised there was a gap in H2G2. So... what do you reckon??

xx Vic xx


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Post 2

Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

Very nice smiley - ok. I think you will need to explain or link from some of the more technical terms, such as 'zooxanthellae'.

Otherwise, a really good entry.


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Post 3

2legs - Hey, babe, take a walk on the wild side...

Good smiley - smiley Well done, nicely written, and it all seems to make sense and be correct (it all seemed to trigger off distant memories of siting in 'Taxonomy' classes at University) smiley - biggrin Though I guess some of the more technical terms might need explaining as already mentioned, though personally there wasn't much I can think of term wise I didn't know already, but not everyone has studied this stuff smiley - weird which is smiley - weird really smiley - biggrinsmiley - goodlucksmiley - applause


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Post 4

Woodpigeon

Yes, it would be nice to get a description of zooxanthellae. And, (shock horror) you used the term Jelly Fish at one stage.

But, after that, this is a really excellent entry. Extremely informative and very well written. Well done. smiley - ok

smiley - peacedoveWoodpigeon


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Post 5

Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

One thing that might be worth pointing out is that some cnids show both medusan and polyp forms in their life. i seem to remember that a jellyfish egg starts out as a polyp which then then grows and splits into a whole lot of little jellyfish. Is this true?


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Post 6

Vic

yeah, jellyfish have polyp stage, i think it's referred to as the planulae stage which allows them to disperse around. I didn't really go into the reproduction as it's a bit complex but i should write about it to make the article more rounded... there's lots that can be said about cloning and colonial Cnidarians and stuff like that!

I shall explain some of the more technical terms as well. cheers for all your advice and thanks for reading through it

xx Vic xx


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Post 7

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Any chance to work on this some more, Vic?

smiley - mouse


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Post 8

Geggs

It seems not, as the author has Elvised.

I propose a move to FM.


Geggs


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Post 9

GreyDesk

Geggs, are you e-mailing, or shall I?


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Post 10

Geggs

You do it, I'm too tired to try to make sense of another list tonight.


Geggs


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Post 11

Geggs

So tired that I'm forgetting may manners.

I meant, of course, that if you would be so kind as to add it to your list, then I would be most oblidged.


Geggs


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Post 12

GreyDesk

No worries smiley - smiley

Consider it added smiley - ok


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Post 13

Vic

I'm sorry, i am about, it's just i've been rather a bit busy at the moment so things like this have slipped way down on the list of things to do.

Exams... new job... grrrr

Vic


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Post 14

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

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Post 15

Gnomon - time to move on

I was disappointed by this entry. There's so much to be said about Cnidarians and I thought this said very little. You provide lots of extra stuff such as examples of convergent evolution and turtles eating plastic bags, but you don't actually tell us very much about Cnidarians themselves.

What are the basic types? Can you give an example of each that we might have heard of or encountered? What makes a jellyfish different from a coral or an anemone? What's a sea pen, and where do you get them?

I'd expect that if there are four types, there should be four sections, each with a header; a description of what is in the type; what the technical and common names for the type are; an example or two of that type.

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Post 16

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Vic hasn't been sighted for more than three months... should we move this one to the FM?


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Post 17

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

seconded for flea market.

Adding to the list!


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