A Conversation for Jackanory
Writing Workshop: A2203615 - Jackanory
Dark Side of the Goon Started conversation Jan 15, 2004
Entry: Jackanory - A2203615
Author: Gradient - Keeper of the Rum And Uncanny - U181676
A2203615 - any thoughts and crits happily received!
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Demon Drawer Posted Jan 15, 2004
Looks very good already. If I can think of anything further I'll potter back.
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Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge") Posted Jan 15, 2004
Looks good to me. I'd say this is ready for peer review!
Otto
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Dark Side of the Goon Posted Jan 15, 2004
You're kidding, right?
I only got it finished today! I think I'll give it a full 24 hours before I move it on. Thanks for the vote of confidence!
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Demon Drawer Posted Jan 16, 2004
There you go Gradient both me and Otto think this is fit for Peer Review and we know a thing or two about writing entries.
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Danny B Posted Jan 16, 2004
I'll third that
Although a half-remembered story from Jackanory did get me into trouble once ("Wow - I remember that story from when I was a kid and I bet it would make a great stage play...")
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Danny B Posted Jan 16, 2004
Can't remember who read it, but it was 'The Phantom Tollbooth' by Norton Juster.
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Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge") Posted Jan 16, 2004
Ah! I have found a constructive criticism...
Spike Milligan didn't write "Help I'm a Prisoner in a Toothpase Factory" - it was John Antrobus
http://www.amazon.co.uk/exec/obidos/ASIN/1844580121/ref=sr_aps_books_1_2/202-0650343-0562225
Spike did the narration for the audio book version, though...
Otto
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Dark Side of the Goon Posted Jan 16, 2004
Thank you!
I'll make that change ASAP!
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Writing Workshop: A2203615 - Jackanory
- 1: Dark Side of the Goon (Jan 15, 2004)
- 2: Demon Drawer (Jan 15, 2004)
- 3: Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge") (Jan 15, 2004)
- 4: Dark Side of the Goon (Jan 15, 2004)
- 5: Demon Drawer (Jan 16, 2004)
- 6: Danny B (Jan 16, 2004)
- 7: Demon Drawer (Jan 16, 2004)
- 8: Danny B (Jan 16, 2004)
- 9: Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge") (Jan 16, 2004)
- 10: Dark Side of the Goon (Jan 16, 2004)
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