A Conversation for Jackanory

Writing Workshop: A2203615 - Jackanory

Post 1

Dark Side of the Goon

Entry: Jackanory - A2203615
Author: Gradient - Keeper of the Rum And Uncanny - U181676

A2203615 - any thoughts and crits happily received!


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Post 2

Demon Drawer

Looks very good already. If I can think of anything further I'll potter back.


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Post 3

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


Looks good to me. I'd say this is ready for peer review!

Otto


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Post 4

Dark Side of the Goon

You're kidding, right?

I only got it finished today! I think I'll give it a full 24 hours before I move it on. Thanks for the vote of confidence!


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Post 5

Demon Drawer

There you go Gradient both me and Otto think this is fit for Peer Review and we know a thing or two about writing entries.

smiley - smiley

smiley - ok


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Post 6

Danny B

I'll third that smiley - smiley

Although a half-remembered story from Jackanory did get me into trouble once ("Wow - I remember that story from when I was a kid and I bet it would make a great stage play...")


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Post 7

Demon Drawer

Sounds like a Kenneth Williams story that does. smiley - winkeye


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Post 8

Danny B

Can't remember who read it, but it was 'The Phantom Tollbooth' by Norton Juster.


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Post 9

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


Ah! I have found a constructive criticism...

Spike Milligan didn't write "Help I'm a Prisoner in a Toothpase Factory" - it was John Antrobus

http://www.amazon.co.uk/exec/obidos/ASIN/1844580121/ref=sr_aps_books_1_2/202-0650343-0562225

Spike did the narration for the audio book version, though...

Otto


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Post 10

Dark Side of the Goon

Thank you!

I'll make that change ASAP!


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