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Entry: Conclusion after the study of AIDS/HIV - A2194599
Author: gecko - U211101

"Short Study about AIDS/HIV"
entry # A2185184
was my first article as starting informations about a subject of interest in our present time.

entry # A2194599
"Conclusion after the study of AIDS/HIV"
was to follow with more elaborate thoughts and explainations around a subject matter for possible help and solution for a human problem.

I would appreciate comments. Thanks.

Researcher nickname: Gecko

You may be allowing your examination of AIDS/HIV to become unfocused. You've brought in population concerns, SARS, and other questions. You could just rename the piece, I guess; but it no longer goes with the title you've chosen.

You may want to check for more recent information on SARS, should you continue to include it. The current suspect is the civet, a cat-like creature that was being used in cooking. They have destroyed thousands, and made it illegal to cook them for human consumption.

Oh, you could also cut-and-paste your piece into a word processing program, and run a spell-check.

Thanks Fords Towel for your suggetions! From h2g2 Review Forum now entry # A2194599 goes back to Gecko's Review.

I am aware of spelling problems, but my WORD software is knocked out in my computer at this time! I don't know when can I get it fixed.?? If I could copy paste to Word Pad and make the spelling corrections I'll do it.

I agree very much to give an other title because it is unfocused to the "conclusion".

Than I would exclude some of other subject matters.

But regardless I'll look into SARS in more details. Since this is relatively new "problem" the informations are not all reliable, like it was ( til 1999) about HIV various theories dealing with false informations! Even today though informations, explainations are STILL IN THE FORUM OF THEORIES and are not certainties, just MORE LIKELY is the origin of HIV determened.

Certainly medical reference books are very quick to say: the origin of XXX illness is unknown! There is no dispute than!

So much for now and thanks again.

I made a print out from all the texts, because the first article review I lost and searching anything with h2g2 SEARCH usually is very difficult.

Gecko

Hello,

There are some (edited) Entries dealing with AIDS-HIV here: A810262 (is the general Entry and liks to other Entries)

Maybe you can find some inspiration those Entries to go on with the origins of HIV.

HELL