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Alternative Writing Workshop: A2151370 - The Bully and his Target

Post 1

Vicki Virago - Proud Mother

Entry: The Bully and his Target - A2151370
Author: Vicki Virago - I can see snow on them there mountains! - U205101

From memories


A2151370 - The Bully and his Target

Post 2

J

Oh dear, I'm so sorry this didn't receive any comment vicki. smiley - erm I've only just noticed it and feel personally embarrassed that this went almost two years without anyone commenting on something that is obviously very personal to you. Just a fluke, I'm sure.

This piece expresses and illustrates the whole relationship pretty well I'd say. The flow is good, and the perspectives are all too real. smiley - hug

Thanks for posting this here way back when smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


A2151370 - The Bully and his Target

Post 3

Cyzaki

Have you read 'Past Mortem' by Ben Elton? Comuppence indeed...

smiley - panda


A2151370 - The Bully and his Target

Post 4

Vicki Virago - Proud Mother

Hey Jodan...don't worry about it! smiley - hug


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