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Alternative Writing Workshop: A21063575 - The Telepathic Dogs Mystery

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robertjstewart

Entry: The Telepathic Dogs Mystery - A21063575
Author: robertjstewart - U7880242

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A21063575 - The Telepathic Dogs Mystery

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Pinniped


You want crit?

I read this one (it was hard work), dipped the other Z one.
Too much dialogue. You won't carry subject matter like this without descriptive prose. You won't convey what it is that you see unless you describe it.

I reckon you're dead wrong about Greene too.

Pinsmiley - erm


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Bluebottle

As this has been deleted I propose Back to Entry.

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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Back to entry.


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