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Alternative Writing Workshop: A21063575 - The Telepathic Dogs Mystery
robertjstewart Started conversation Mar 23, 2007
A21063575 - The Telepathic Dogs Mystery
Pinniped Posted Mar 23, 2007
You want crit?
I read this one (it was hard work), dipped the other Z one.
Too much dialogue. You won't carry subject matter like this without descriptive prose. You won't convey what it is that you see unless you describe it.
I reckon you're dead wrong about Greene too.
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Bluebottle Posted Feb 12, 2017
As this has been deleted I propose Back to Entry.
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