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Post 1

chocoholic

Entry: Queen Victoria’s Chocolate Gifts for her Men at War - A15987324
Author: Chocoholic's Delight Club - a hootoo club with a difference - U4288864

hmm it's very short, the Entry is not about the second Boer war, or about Queen Victoria, just the choccie. smiley - smiley

I've not added links yet, will do so soon. smiley - ok

CD/Em
smiley - choc


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Post 2

semper_paratus

A bit short, but still very good. Perhaps you could add this link for a picture of the tin. http://www.slv.vic.gov.au/miscpics/0/0/1/im/mp001935.jpg

Can't think of what else you could add really.
smiley - ok


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Post 3

semper_paratus

Just a thought and to help spread the entry out a little. Perhaps you could seperate the section regarding what the tins were used for afterwards. Give it a title like 'Personal Items'. That's just off the top of my head, you sould probably think of a better one.


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Post 4

semper_paratus

Also there's no entry on Queen Victoria (unbelievable really), but there is this

http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/historic_figures/victoria_queen.shtml


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Post 5

aka Bel - A87832164

Interesting entry,and a wonderful idea of the queen.
Looking at the photos of the tin though, I can't imagine they could hold more personal belongings than maybe a ring, or the identity disk if it was already in use that far back?
Oh, and you say:
>>The chocolate manufacture, Cadbury, [who] since around 1854 ...<< shouldn't that be 'which'?


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Post 6

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

Brilliantsmiley - ok - i really like it
smiley - cakemight be an idea to say what the Boer war was.
smiley - cakea few more links:
A662942 - The Quaker Peace Testament
A5320702 - The Religious Society of Friends - The Quakers in Britain
A177059 - Chocolate
A657263 - Pacifism

smiley - goodlucksmiley - winkeye

Ps. wouldn't the chocolate melt in the heatsmiley - star?smiley - laugh


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Post 7

aka Bel - A87832164

>>Ps. wouldn't the chocolate melt in the heat?<<

With an average daily max. of temps between 24 and 27°C (depending on where in South Africa you are), I don't think that was too much of a problem. smiley - smiley


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steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

ok, you winsmiley - winkeye


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Post 9

aka Bel - A87832164

Well, I forgot to mention that that's for December (one of the hottest months, apparently). smiley - smiley


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Post 10

chocoholic

smiley - cheers for your comments and compliments smiley - smiley

A question for you, which link do you think I should use

http://www.boerwarsociety.org/images/chocolate.jpg

or

http://www.slv.vic.gov.au/miscpics/0/0/1/im/mp001935.jpg

I'll think of a title for the use of the tins as suggested.

Yes, I scratched my head, and thought 'what can you fit in there', when I saw the picture of the tins, I'll elaborate a bit on that. Bel, the 'dog tags' were first used in the Boer war, so that's something of interest I can add in relation to the empty tin's use. smiley - cheers

http://www.awm.gov.au/encyclopedia/dog_tags.htm

I'll change 'who to 'which'

Links will be added soon. smiley - oksmiley - smiley

CD/Em
smiley - choc


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Post 11

aka Bel - A87832164

I prefer the second link, the picture is larger and the tinbox looks used, not brand new as in the first link.
I had no idea that the 'dogs tags' where introduced in that very war, I'm really glad I mentioned them smiley - smiley
Do you know the size of the tin boxes? I could imagine that quite a few soldiers took a b/w photograph of their beloved; when looking at my grandma's albums, these photos were quite small in size(probably because of the costs) and on relatively thick paper - don't know about the UK, though.


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Post 12

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

sorry to be a spoilsport but i don't think you are allowed to do links to external picturessmiley - erm:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/A264520#LINK

smiley - winkeye


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Post 13

aka Bel - A87832164

In that case, we'll have to find somebody who can make a photo of the box. smiley - ok


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Post 14

Wilma Neanderthal

You can have external links. Not too many, mind and you need to be sort of sure it will still be there next week - so no commercial sites etc, but yes, you are allowed.

Photo sounds a better idea though smiley - biggrin
W


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Post 15

aka Bel - A87832164

I've left a message in the forum smiley - ok


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Post 16

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

good ideasmiley - ok
sorry to be a nuisance smiley - erm




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Post 17

aka Bel - A87832164

You're not being a nuisance smiley - smiley


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Post 18

Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

If you read that section carefully Steve, it says you can't to link to Researchers Personal Spaces, I had read it a couple of times to understand that. Other links within the guidelines are fine. smiley - oksmiley - smiley

Emmily
<bluebutterfly.


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Post 19

Wilma Neanderthal

You moist defineticely are not smiley - hug
W


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Post 20

aka Bel - A87832164

Scroll further down, em, ook me a while to discover it:
>>Linking to off-site pictures is not allowed, due to copyright issues that can arise from this.<<
I have to admit, that I didn't know that.


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