A Conversation for DAVID BLAINE - "ABOVE THE BELOW"
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leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator] Started conversation Nov 25, 2003
either you should change the title or write some material about David Blaine in general. there's some spelling mistakes and some of the sentences are a bit cumbersome
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DJR Posted Dec 9, 2003
cheers for the advice - duly noted...
could you specify spelling mistakes / cumbersome sentences... i seemed to have missed them - clearly you haven't!
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Beeblebrox Posted Jul 14, 2004
I know I'm not the guy who started this but...
In the fifth paragraph you've got 'abverse', it should be 'adverse'
'Believe' in the fourth paragraph up from the bottom, and 'insistent' in the paragraph below that are wrong too.
That’s all I found, a good way to check for errors before you post is to copy the text into Word or a similar program and use the spell check.
Apart from that I thought it was a good piece. The best stunt that I heard about was someone flying a cheeseburger suspended from a remote control helicopter around outside the box.
I think that David Blaine must be cheating in some way. After all, he is an Illusionist
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