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Peer Review: A13268333 - Dr Hook ( And The Medicine Show)

Post 1

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

Entry: Dr Hook ( And The Medicine Show) - A13268333
Author: lil ...ACE/Scout ....*still dragging Rob the Carpet about* - U551837

You can blame VV and Natalie for putting the idea into my head.


A13268333 - Dr Hook ( And The Medicine Show)

Post 2

AlexAshman


Looks interesting smiley - ok

First off, you should get rid of those brackets in the title, and put tags on the insides of the list items (...</LI&gtsmiley - winkeye so that they work properly on different browsers.

And here are the nitpicks:

"Ray Sawyer, Bill Francis and George Cummings were all orginally" --> originally
"who flew from Calfornia to New Jersey" --> California
"He was last known to have been working on a solo cd" --> CD

"The commercial songs were their greatest hits, unfortunately they were to become a safety net."
, --> ;

Alex smiley - cuddle]


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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

Thanks Alex, I've made those changes smiley - ok

smiley - cuddle]


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Post 4

AlexAshman


Oops - I've caused more trouble with the lists - I got the rules mixed up smiley - wah

If you don't have or tags around the list, then the tags should go outside the tags. smiley - sorry

smiley - cuddle]


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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

sshhh.. It's nothing drastic, I will change them around smiley - smooch

smiley - cuddle]


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Post 6

U168592

This is a nicely written Entry on a band I had the pleasure of having a few LPs of.

I always wondered if they were the inspiration for the Muppets band of Dr Teeth and the Electric Mayhem?

smiley - goodluck with this one smiley - smiley


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Post 7

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

Done that, Alex smiley - oksmiley - cuddle]

Thank you, Matt smiley - biggrin

Didn't you ever get to see them in concert?


lil xx
smiley - magic


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Post 8

U168592

Unfortunately, no - I was only 9 when they toured Oz in 1985. At least I don't think I went along with my parents. I may have been stoned and missed it...smiley - winkeye


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Post 9

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

Very good!! smiley - rofl

smiley - magic


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Post 10

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

>>BBC radio disc jockey's even -- no '

smiley - smiley


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Post 11

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

*nods*

Yes.. smiley - biggrin


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Post 12

Natalie

It's my fault is it?! smiley - yikes

Great stuff - lots of info here! smiley - ok

A bit of pedantry from me:

The band names and club/venue names don't need to be in quotation marks.
mid 60s --> mid-1960s
19 year old --> 19-year-old
'Peter Pan' --> Peter Pan
disc jockey's --> disc jockeys
bands overseas sales --> band's overseas sales
legal advise --> legal advice

I wonder if Lil has ever seen the band live...met them in person, even? smiley - huhsmiley - angelsmiley - winkeye


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Post 13

U168592

I've heard stories of straaange groupies...not seen the footage though smiley - tongueout


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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

>>I wonder if Lil has ever seen the band live...met them in person, even?<<


Only once or five times smiley - whistle


I must admit, Rik has the softest lips! smiley - blush

What?.. Blame Ray, he asked the bouncer to lift me up to the window of the coach!.. I smiley - kiss'd them all! smiley - magic



Oh.. Okay, I've made those changes!! smiley - angel


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Post 15

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

*twiddles thumbs*

smiley - smiley


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Post 16

Natalie

'Please Mrs Avery I've...just got to talk to her...' smiley - yikessmiley - yikes


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Post 17

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

smiley - groan

Not that one.. pullease! smiley - grovel


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Post 18

Natalie

It's been on continuous loop in my brain since this went into PR!

As a result, I was actually going to offer the Scouts a £4425245 cash bribe to be poised on standby for when this has been in PR for seven days. But someone told me it was against BBC Guidelines. Pah! Petty-minded bureaucracy!

Great Entry though! smiley - cheers

'I was sitting all alone, watching people...' what?! smiley - yikes


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Post 19

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned

aww shucks! smiley - blush

Can't you sing Carry Me Carrie, instead smiley - biggrin


"2nd Street and Broadway, sittin' in a doorway. Head held in his hands.. "


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Post 20

BMT

Hmmm, I could be wrong here Lil, I'm getting the feeling that Natalie likes this, at least a little bit anyway!! smiley - laughsmiley - laugh

Tis a good read though, again heard of Dr.Hook, even like some of there music but knew little about the band or it's history. smiley - smiley

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