A Conversation for Eric Bloodaxe, King of Jorvik (York) & Northumbria (947-954)

Peer Review: A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 1

HappyDude

Entry: King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954) - A1307927
Author: HappyDude (The Original Disco Duck) … wearing a skirt (again) <YIKES> : PLUG F19585?thread=316174 - U150533

OK, so it's short but hey it was a 1000 years ago ...


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 2

Lady Scott

I think it could use some smiley - erm "embellishment".... spice it up with some made up names and events, even a little dialog...

Doesn't that sound like fun? smiley - bigeyes


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 3

HappyDude

*giggles*, well I wouldn't want to put the guys over at BBC History out of job smiley - erm


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 4

Lady Scott

Well then... how about a little fun on an *alternate* fictional entry?


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 5

HappyDude

He does sound a bit like a thingite smiley - yikes


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Post 6

Lady Scott

There ya go. Good idea!smiley - ok


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 7

HappyDude

to get slightly back on topic, I've just made some slight alterations to the entry smiley - smiley


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 8

Cyzaki

I think you need to say in the title where he was king of.

smiley - panda


A1307927 - King Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)

Post 9

HappyDude

generaly speaking where ever he happened to be at the time smiley - smiley


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Post 10

Cyzaki

Maybe change the title to just 'Eric Bloodaxe (947-954)', although surely those aren't the right dates, unless he was only 7 when he died...?

smiley - panda


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of York

Post 11

HappyDude

with kings its usual to put the dates of their reign not their life smiley - smiley


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of York

Post 12

Cyzaki

Which brings me back to my first question - where was he king of during those dates?

smiley - panda


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik

Post 13

HappyDude

well if look at either the the thread title or the article ya would notice...smiley - whistle


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Post 14

Cyzaki

That's better smiley - biggrin

smiley - panda


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik (York)

Post 15

HappyDude

smiley - cool


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik (York)

Post 16

HappyDude

done some alterations to the text, nothing major though smiley - smiley


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik (York)

Post 17

Number Six

Nice. Couple of typos - 'contempory' > 'contemporary', and is there a 'the' missing from "holding court in hip and happening city of Jorvik"?

smiley - ok

smiley - mod


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik (York)

Post 18

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

It might be nice to say what the limits of his kingdom were, HappyDude, using modern England (and if necessary, Scotland) as landmarks.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik (York)

Post 19

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

This seems to have some more information, which might be utilised.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/ancient/vikings/bloodaxe_01.shtml

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A1307927 - Eric Bloodaxe (947-954), King of Jorvik (York)

Post 20

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Just had a read through all five pages of the BBC links - seems he was killed in battle.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/ancient/vikings/bloodaxe_05.shtml

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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