h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I've altered the ending of the first paragraph to accomodate SoRB's comments

Thanks Gnomon, the family had a lovely time there this weekend

For ease of reference;

A11788699 - The Natural History Museum, South Kensington, London

Great write-up, Matt

I visit about once every few years, and you've really captured the place in this entry.

Well, not all that rare - many of the larger galleries and museums are free nowadays.

I'd consider splitting this long sentence.

Sounds slightly odd to me. Can you be 'in' a pinnacle?

Can I just agree with a previous reviewer that this is a great footnote

Icy

One more thing - do you need 'South Kensington' in the title? There's only one 'the Natural History Museum' in London.

Icy

Thanks Icy, have updated.

Think it reads better now

worth mentioning ???

... the blue whale and big mammels are in what was orgibally the whale hall, guessing most of the others have swam off

... the earth gallaries were what remains of the Geological Museum which was absorbed into the Nat Hist museum in 1986. Was relaunched as Earth Gallaries in 1998

... One Of Our Dinasours is Missing. A classic film

Great read, Matt.
Just one small typo:

>>Cromwell Road will be the last obstacle before readching the museum.<< reaching

Bel

Thanks both, now updated

I've added some more information to this, think it's finished now

Just one thing, Matt:


I'm slightly confused here - are we talking about the ceiling (which we can see) or the roof (which we can't). What is on the NHM hall ceiling? You don't say.

Icy

ahh, good point Will fix that to make more sense

There ya go

All done

Thanks Matt - that makes sense now! (but I still don't know what's on the ceiling )

Looks ready to me.

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