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UnderGuide Editors Started conversation Aug 18, 2003
Hi Ben. Wonderful job. I have but three points 
The beginning word 'THERE' is capitalized and I don't know why.
The footnote implies that this is not written in the first person, which it is. Perhaps the footnote would read better as 'This author is from the Phillipines.'
The header is inaccurate because it says that the entire body is about lessons. It also looks bad, and generally speaking, headers at the beginning are taken out. This isn't the EG though
Jodan - 
PS- I'm going to speak with Ashley about the links...
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