A Conversation for GG: Deus Ex Machina

Peer Review: A1112392 - Deus Ex Machina

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Gnomon - time to move on

Entry: Deus Ex Machina - A1112392
Author: Gnomon - U151503

I'm going on holidays for a week, starting Saturday, so here's something for you to talk about while I'm gone. I'll answer any comments when I get back.


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Mu Beta

I thought this might be about the rock band, but apparently not.smiley - biggrin

All done in typically Gnomonishly good style - no problems here.smiley - ok

Actually, one small problem: You've used both 'godlike' and 'god-like' at places. You'd better decide which one.

B


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Danny B

You could also mention Woody Allen's surreal play 'God', parts of which are set in Ancient Greece and feature a Deus Ex Machina quite prominently (hence the title). I don't know how closely 'Mighty Aphrodite' is related to the stage play (which is very strange, jumps about in time, has actors emerging from the audience and, at one point, features a complete breakdown in reality), but from your description they sound as though there are similarities.


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Number Six

Spoken like a true sub-ed!

smiley - mod


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Gnomon - time to move on

Changed to 'godlike' throughout.

I haven't seen Woody Allen's 'God'. 'Mighty Aphrodite' was a fairly normal Woody Allen, except that a Greek chorus comments on many of the scenes and Allen gets into long conversations with Cassandra.


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Danny B

'God' also has a Greek chorus. You can find the full text of the play by doing a Google search for 'Woody Allen God' - it's the first result returned. I would post a link here, but the page in question is probably a little naughty in reproducing the whole text, so I'd better not smiley - smiley


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Gnomon - time to move on

Having had a quick glance through Woody Allen's 'God', I can see that it is nothing whatseover like 'Mighty Aphrodite'.

It might be worth a mention at the start in the section on Greek plays. Have you seen the play? I'd like to know that it is a good play before I mention it. Unfortunately, I can't tell from reading the script whether it is an enjoyable play or not.


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Danny B

Is it a good play..?

Well, I've seen one production and been in one production (at the last minute, as part of the Greek chorus, with a script!)

In theatrical terms, it's probably not a 'good play' in the way that, say, 'Romeo and Juliet' is, but...

It's a fun play, both to watch and be in. I can't imagine that the humour is to everybody's taste - it is very surreal and very self-referential ('Woody Allen' appears as a character and the director is encouraged to change the names of people and locations to specific local references).

If you're in the mood for that sort of silliness (and I usually am smiley - silly), it's great fun, but I imagine some (a lot?) of people might find it annoying. I could also imagine that it would be very easy to come up with a dreadful production of it...

Well, that was a long answer to a short question. I hope it helps! If not, I'm sure the Entry won't suffer too much if you don't mention it. It was just my smiley - 2cents

smiley - cheers


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Gnomon - time to move on

I've added a footnote, so as not to disturb the flow too much.


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Post 10

Danny B

A perfect compromise smiley - ok

Cheers, Gnomon!

(Oh, and great Entry, by the way smiley - smiley)


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Um, Gnonom, one has to argue with using Blake's 7 as an example of the device. Half the time the crew on the planet end up in worse peril becasue the teleporter's broken, the crewman manning it is unconscious/drunk/flown off somewhere.

Let me have a think about a better example....

smiley - ale


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Post 12

Gnomon - time to move on

So the Avon in your name isn't a tribute to the Avon Lady, then? smiley - biggrin


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Err, no smiley - blush

Seriously though, I'm sure there are better examples somewhere...

smiley - ale


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Trout Montague

Good work. Thanks for the erudtion.

T


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Post 15

Trout Montague

Now if you can just help me out with my speeling.


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Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - biggrin


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Post 17

Trout Montague

Do any of the John Grishams end in any way other than the Witness Protection Programme?


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Intersturber (scout, but only on thursdays)

Nicely done! It's about time somebody tried to clear up the meaning of deus es machina. If I ever mention it when faced with a movie or book containing one, those around me sort of stare while drooling over the fact that a) I just said something in a language they don't understand and b)They have no inkling about anything about ancient Greek plays. Everything here seems to be cleared up, how's your speeling coming along?smiley - winkeye

Intersturber
smiley - towel


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Post 19

Sea Change

If it comes from Greek plays, why it it in Latin?


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Post 20

Intersturber (scout, but only on thursdays)

Because life is out to confuse you and only you.

smiley - winkeye
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