A Conversation for Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Peer Review: A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 1

Jimi X

Entry: Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA - A1093961
Author: Jimi X - U53353

A nice little entry about a small town in south-central Pennsylvania.

I still need to add some links, but it is about as done as it'll ever be otherwise.

smiley - cheers
- Jimi X


A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 2

McKay The Disorganised

Pretty complete Jimi - but (didn't ya just know that was coming)

Middletown, Pennsylvania is probably most famous for being next door to the site of the worst commercial nuclear power accidents in history1. This sentence has a one missing from it.

This restaurant features fine dining in a large restored Victorian that - a large Victorian building ?

Breakfast offerings include scrapple and creamed chipped beef - I don't know what scrapple is....

And how the hell do all these resteraunts stay in business - is there a large passing trade ?

Just my smiley - 2cents

smiley - ok

smiley - cider


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Post 3

Jimi X

Scrapple is at A791273

As for the missing words, I'll add them on Monday afternoon. These small towns still have a purpose for the folks living out in the more rural areas.

While they(we) can visit shopping malls for our groceries and commercial needs, a good quality restaurant is typically found in an old town. Middletown fills that niche rather well.

Thanks for giving it a read through...

smiley - cheers
- X


A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 4

Jimi X

Links added and corrections made.

smiley - cheers

- Jimi X


A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 5

Demon Drawer

Pah and I ned up attempting to finish off my opus after the ton. smiley - winkeye


A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 6

Jimi X

En Anglais s'il vous plait?


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Post 7

Demon Drawer

Non!


A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 8

Demon Drawer

En anglais: Since reaching the milestone of 100 I have started to finish up some of the opus-like entries that have required considerable research. You sir, have got into a car and travelled to an unwritten up area of your home state. smiley - winkeye Not that I mind too much one of my current projects is already looing like being at least 9 entries when it gets divided up into entry sized chuncks.



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Post 9

Demon Drawer

BTW did I say like the entry. smiley - winkeye


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Post 10

Jimi X

smiley - laugh

I had to do this one because I have two other ones in the pipeline that deal with Middletown. One on the nuclear accident and one on Micky Mouse. smiley - ok


A1093961 - Middletown, Pennsylvania, USA

Post 11

Demon Drawer

I hate when that happens. I have pressure to get Belfast done my myselt three times and three other researchers. All so it can be linked up.


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Post 12

Dr Hell

Nice Entry. Does it bear any resemblance to 'the Simpson's' town?

I...I...I spotted a typo: "But the most curious _things_ about the town"

Right, right? That's a typo, innit?

smiley - biggrin
HELL

PS: Demon Drawer - yah we *know* you have written 100 solo Entries smiley - tongueout!


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Post 14

Jimi X

Sorry I missed your message Hell.

Hopefully, the Sub will catch it!

And thanks to the Scout who picked this one!!

smiley - cheers

- Jimi X


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Post 15

SchrEck Inc.

Hi Jimi,

I got it, it's at A3709406. Any comments? smiley - bigeyes

SchrEck Inc.

BTW, I added the links just to have non-Jimi X-entries in here... smiley - winkeye


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Post 16

Jimi X

Actually, if you could add an 'It is' to the front of the sentence: 'The sort of place in which Norman Rockwell might have painted a scene or two 50 years ago.'

Outside of that it looks fine.

smiley - cheers
- X


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Post 17

SchrEck Inc.

Done! smiley - cheers


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