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Entry: Navrongo - A1073440
Author: Researcher 229475 - U229475

To know Navrongo is to love Navrongo. I hope this allows you to do both just a little

Interesting piece - I want to go there

One thing you'll need to do is to remove all the first-person references - the Editors prefer entries which are being submitted to Peer Review to be written entirely in third person apart from quotations and reported speech.

Brilliant.

Obviously written from the heart and in a laconic easy style. Whilst I agree with the sentiments of the last line it would probably have to be re-written along the lines of.... "Navrongo justs needs a little help to become even more pleasant, and the poverty of the people could be greatly eased were it not for the horrendous debts inflicted on it by the Wetern nations." Or similar.

Any thoughts on responding to the comments made above, Researcher 229475? This is a good article and I like it, but it does need a little polishing to get into the Edited Guide, as they say.

The two month hurdle is fast approaching, does anyone else think that this should be heading towards the Flea Market? I think it's a rather good entry and would have a place in the EG with a bit of polishing.

Indeed.