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Peer Review: A79093911 - Update for A143849 Michigan,US

Post 1

shagbark

Entry: Update for A143849 Michigan,US - A79093911
Author: Shagbark- wishing everyone a Happy New Year - U170775

I said when the 2010 Census numbers were in I would be submitting an update on the state of Michigan and here it is.


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Post 2

anhaga

You mention in the 'Geography' section that 'There are bridges in all three of these cities.'

I don't know if it matters, but as well as the Ambassador Bridge between Detroit and Windsor, Ontario, there is also a tunnel under the Detroit River connecting these two cities.smiley - erm


The entry looks good. A great improvement.smiley - smiley


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Post 3

shagbark

Anymore suggestions for this update?


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Post 4

h5ringer

Since this is an update, it won't go to a subbie, so it needs to be exactly right:

smiley - mod remove the space between the population 9,878,813 and footnote 1
smiley - mod insert a space between and
smiley - mod insert a space between and
smiley - mod remove the colon after <'Si quaeris peninsulam amoenam circumspice'>
smiley - mod insert a space between the two sentences; smoldering --> smouldering
smiley - mod comma between and
smiley - mod volunters --> volunteers
smiley - mod remove the comma and the semi-colon; peninusula --> peninsula
smiley - mod what are aughts?
smiley - mod Population --> population
smiley - mod --> a newspaper article in December 2010
smiley - mod insert a space between and
smiley - mod Northwest --> northwest and South -> south
smiley - mod insert a space between and and before
smiley - mod change comma to fullstop
smiley - mod North --> north and insert a space after Windsor
smiley - mod remove the comma
smiley - mod Picturesque --> picturesque
smiley - mod Prison --> prison
smiley - mod it's --> its
smiley - mod Sand Dune --> sand dune
smiley - mod Shores --> shores; Northwest --> northwest
smiley - mod resort --> resort
smiley - mod Change the double quotes to single quotes
smiley - mod chemical --> Chemical
smiley - mod Malcolm X and Thomas Edison; renouned --> renowned
smiley - mod commedian --> comedian
smiley - mod Footnote 2 liscense --> licence

smiley - puff


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Post 5

shagbark

I think I got those, anything elsesmiley - biro


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Post 6

shagbark

as for aughts see http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/aughts


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Post 7

shagbark

One newspaper made aughts their lead story for the year
Lansing City Pulse (MI), Sat, Jan 2, 2010
What you Aught to read text
Local News / Newspaper / Weekly
smiley - spacesmiley - space The best Michigan-related books of the ยด00s... Like selecting a fine wine, choosing the best Michigan-related books of the Aughts can be a daunting task.


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Post 8

h5ringer

You missed one:

smiley - mod peninusula --> peninsula

Also there should be a space after the comma after the State motto: <'Si quaeris peninsulam amoenam circumspice', which translates as>


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Post 9

shagbark

hope that is right now-got to run RL calling. smiley - run


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Post 10

shagbark

Well, I'm back now. Is this article meeting everyones approval?


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Post 11

shagbark

just a side note: I also updated my Florida article A3636245
but that article is not under review because it is probably to controversial to become an "Approved Article" smiley - laugh


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Post 12

shagbark

smiley - yawn I am thinking of taking a nap.
Any comments on the update? Any at all smiley - huh


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Post 13

shagbark

I guess everyone is to preoccupied with the coming of the new H2G2


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Post 14

shagbark

The new Governor of Michigan(Rick Snyder- I hope I spelled that right) has instituted a website comparing our statistics with other states.
Since the editors have said I could link to pdf files as long as they were from verifiable sources I have included his recap. It is called Dashboard.


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Post 15

shagbark

Here is the ingfo on the Governor
http://www.michigan.gov/snyder
and the home page to his dashboard
http://www.Michigan.gov/MiDashboard


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Post 16

shagbark

and herde is the paper reviewing the aughts in Michigan.
the lady on the cover was governor before Snyder
http://npaper-wehaa.com/citypulse/2009/12/30/#?dpg=1


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Post 17

shagbark

smiley - zen


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Post 18

shagbark

udpate located at http://www.bbc.co.uk/entry/A79093911


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Post 19

shagbark

post nineteen falls on the second page of newhootoo


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Post 20

shagbark

so what page does twenty fall on &lt huh &gt


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