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Chocolate Body Paint
chocoholic Posted Aug 19, 2006
Does anyone know if there's a warning on the packaging that the body paint may stain? 
CD/Em 
Chocolate Body Paint
U168592 Posted Aug 19, 2006
The only warnings I ever saw made me chuckle -
WARNING - This product should not be used by anyone with a heart condition.
and,
WARNING - This prodct may cause obscene feelings of lust.
Chocolate Body Paint
chocoholic Posted Aug 20, 2006
Matt, I think the entry is finished and ready to submit to PR, I've just got the links to add. 
A13795464 any comments, corrections or suggestions? 
CD/Em
Chocolate Body Paint
U168592 Posted Aug 20, 2006
Looks ready for PR to me, other than a missing 'to' in the final sentence (...to wash off any remains (or remnants, not sure which is best) of the paint...)
mmmm, tasty stuff 
Chocolate Body Paint
loonycat - run out of fizz Posted Aug 20, 2006
Sounds good. 
Just being pedantic, needs a comma before the word 'stop' in the 3rd paragraph.
Chocolate Body Paint
chocoholic Posted Aug 20, 2006
Okay, Matt, I've added 'to' and changed 'remains' to remnants, it was a toss up between the two, and I wasn't sure which to use, as you sugggested remnants, I changed it.
I'll pop it into PR, and then I'm off to play 
CD/Em
Chocolate Body Paint
chocoholic Posted Aug 20, 2006
Comma added, looneycat, be as pedantic as you like.
CD/Em
Chocolate Body Paint
chocoholic Posted Aug 20, 2006
20 August 2006
Chocolate Body Paint A13795464 has been submitted to Peer Review - F48874?thread=3379888
CD/Em
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