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Post 1

FairlyStrange

Thanks for a great editing job on "Hobbiest Mechanics"! One of these days I'll be able to put my words together that well! All changes were for the best!

One thing you might want to pass up the "ladder", though. Footnote 2 is incorrect. "Drivetrain" refers to the engine, transmission, driveshaft(or shafts) and the drive axle as a unit.

Keep up the great work, Hypoman!smiley - smiley

NM


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Post 2

Hypoman

I'm rapt that it turned out so well - not being a hobbyist, myself, and having only as much mechanical nous as absolutely necessary to fix what I need, I was a bit concerned that more errors like this would find their ways into the article!

I'll pass on the advice.

Excellent article, FS!smiley - smiley

H.


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Post 3

FairlyStrange

Thanks, H! Other than that, it's perfect!

It only goes to show that a good editor need not know the subject...just how the words should be used to discribe the subject!smiley - smiley

NM


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Post 4

FairlyStrange

I noticed the correction to "Footnote 2". Thanks...now it's perfect!smiley - smiley

NM


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