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My essay which you helped contribute to: maybe you'll want to do more
Leo Started conversation Jul 30, 2004
Well, you are cordially invited to review the first part of my essay which is comfortably residing in my journal section.
Disclaimer: this is not an invitation to kick around Americans.
It is an invitation to help a fellow human being who hasn't got time to really polish it up alone finish off an essay.
What I'm looking for is advice on grammatical, structural, etc things, as well as general suggestions on accuracy,
and to be told if anything comes across as too overbearing, pushy, or superior, which I would like to avoid.
Also, do I need to be PC and say "he or she" or can I slip by with a 'he'?
And any other random advice.
Thanks for your help.
(and I'm not submitting this for peer review bec. its not for the guide and I figured all those ranting people who helped me gather the info could help me shape it.)
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