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the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish Started conversation May 23, 2007
yep, cheers, now I've lost too. Thanks for that!!!
anyway, have a look over on A22766402 and let me know if it okay to send to the eds?
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R_O_Shipman Posted May 23, 2007
that's fine, but could you maybe make the 'You have just lost the game' at the end a seperate paragraph. A dramatic closing sentance deserves space!
Good work though.
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