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Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK

Post 1

Cyzaki

Hiya!

I'm your friendly local Sub-Editor for your entry A1124713, Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK.

I'm new to Sub-Editing, and this is the first entry I've Sub-Edited, so I hope I do you justice!

You're very welcome to have a look at what I've done so far, and comment (or tell me I've done it all wrong and to put it back how it was!), and I would welcome your input!

smiley - panda


Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK

Post 2

Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness..

Hi!

It's my first entry! So a first for both of us smiley - biggrin

I'll have a butchers at it today, smiley - ta


Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK

Post 3

Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness..

Dodgy sentence methinks:

"If water-based torture, erm, sport, is more your thing there is even a swimming event"

Should there be an extra comma, after 'thing'?


Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK

Post 4

Cyzaki

I'm not sure, I tried saying it out loud and I wouldn't tend to pause after 'thing', but I'm not convinced... If you would prefer a comma then I'll add one - it is your entry after all!

And if that's the only thing you could find to comment on then I'm happy smiley - biggrin

smiley - panda


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Post 5

Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness..

*pondering far too much over one comma smiley - biggrin*

I'll have a look and think when I'm more awake smiley - winkeye


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Post 6

Cyzaki

I don't think it's really that important, but in the end it's your work so it's up to you. I don't really mind either way!

smiley - panda


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Post 7

Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness..

I noticed it's now an official Edited Entry! smiley - wow Don't know if it made it onto the front page or not smiley - erm I think we should be told if it does!

Just a note really to say, thanks for you're help smiley - cheers and congratulations on your first sub-editing task! smiley - bubbly

smiley - ta
Queegle smiley - biggrin


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Post 8

Cyzaki

It was on the front page a couple of days ago - you should have got an e-mail letting you know it was there.

smiley - panda


Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK

Post 9

Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness..

Just checked the email address that is in my preferences, and realised it was a really old one! Somehow managed to remember the password for it, but no email there smiley - sadface

And I don't appear to be able to update my email address either smiley - sadface


Entry is still cool though smiley - coolsmiley - biggrin


Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK

Post 10

Cyzaki

Maybe you need to grab a friendly Guru smiley - biggrin

smiley - panda


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