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Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Cyzaki Started conversation Jul 30, 2003
Hiya!
I'm your friendly local Sub-Editor for your entry A1124713, Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK.
I'm new to Sub-Editing, and this is the first entry I've Sub-Edited, so I hope I do you justice!
You're very welcome to have a look at what I've done so far, and comment (or tell me I've done it all wrong and to put it back how it was!), and I would welcome your input!
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness.. Posted Jul 31, 2003
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness.. Posted Jul 31, 2003
Dodgy sentence methinks:
"If water-based torture, erm, sport, is more your thing there is even a swimming event"
Should there be an extra comma, after 'thing'?
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Cyzaki Posted Jul 31, 2003
I'm not sure, I tried saying it out loud and I wouldn't tend to pause after 'thing', but I'm not convinced... If you would prefer a comma then I'll add one - it is your entry after all!
And if that's the only thing you could find to comment on then I'm happy
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness.. Posted Aug 1, 2003
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Cyzaki Posted Aug 1, 2003
I don't think it's really that important, but in the end it's your work so it's up to you. I don't really mind either way!
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness.. Posted Aug 14, 2003
I noticed it's now an official Edited Entry! Don't know if it made it onto the front page or not
I think we should be told if it does!
Just a note really to say, thanks for you're help and congratulations on your first sub-editing task!
Queegle
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Cyzaki Posted Aug 14, 2003
It was on the front page a couple of days ago - you should have got an e-mail letting you know it was there.
Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
Queeglesproggit - Keeper of the evil Thingite Avon Lady Army and Mary Poppins's bag of darkness.. Posted Aug 15, 2003
Just checked the email address that is in my preferences, and realised it was a really old one! Somehow managed to remember the password for it, but no email there
And I don't appear to be able to update my email address either
Entry is still cool though
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Subbing your entry - Waendel Walk, Wellingborough, UK
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