h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hello, The Sun and the Star
I have subbed A43406750 which I'd like you to subscribe to (as this is the Entry which will go live and people will comment at) and also approve my changes

I will then return it to the Editors of h2g2 who will give it a final polish then change its status to "pending" and it will be featured on the Front Page sometime next week (probably). You will be notified by email the day it goes live

I know you've written articles before but it was a while ago so I hope you didn't mind me reminding you of the procedure

Thanks again for writing this, I really enjoyed subbing it

Galaxy Babe

Hey GB! Have completely forgotton how it all works, so thank you very much for taking the time to come over and tell me.

Entry looks great. Lovely links. And a picture. Weee!

I have spotted something that I'd like you to change, though. I cannot think what I was doing, as it's one of my pet peeves. I can only plead stress though having to shorten my sentences.

Anyway, in the first para, could we change:

'All of these memorials have many things in common, however there are some interesting differences.'

To

'All of these memorials have many things in common. However, there are some interesting differences.'

Or

'All of these memorials have many things in common, but there are some interesting differences.'

Pretty pretty please with sugar on top? It'll drive me nuts otherwise.

how's that?

*Pathetically grateful* I'm not going to look any more or I will start agonising about commas or whether it should be 'the' or 'that' in the third paragraph from the end.

*Closes eyes* Take it away! Take it away!

OK it's pending now

You'll get an email from the Eds the day it's published on the Front Page

See you around!

GB