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Bluebottle Started conversation Jan 16, 2020
A87964807 Mad Max - the post-apocalyptic movies
I'll be subbing the above, so please subscribe.
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Subbing Mad Max
Bluebottle Posted Jan 20, 2020
I've made a few minor tweaks (mainly to language, changing a few uses of 'movie' to 'film' to avoid too much repetition and similarly changing a 'truck' to 'lorry') but can I check a couple of sentences with you, please?
'The first part of 'Mad Max' is truly a strange film which doesn't seem to fit to the others of the series at all.'
- By 'first part' do you mean the whole first film in the series, not just the first part or Act of that specific film?
'What is Dryland in 'Waterworld' turns out to be Sydney in 'Mad Max''
Dryland in 'Waterworld' was Mount Everest, not Sydney. Do you mean something like 'In 'Mad Max', Sydney is considered a mythical paradise similar to how Dryland was perceived in 'Waterworld'?
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Jan 22, 2020
I'll read it as soon as a can.
Yes, I mean the whole first film.
And yes, that's what I meant about Dryland/Sydney.
Thanks for finding the right words for me.
Subbing Mad Max
Bluebottle Posted Jan 22, 2020
Thanks, I've tweaked those bits now so it is ready for you to read through at your convenience.
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Feb 19, 2020
Sorry, yes, I finally did.
The only thing I noticed is that at the start of 'Fury Road' the tense suddenly switches from present to past for a few sentences.
Subbing Mad Max
Bluebottle Posted Feb 20, 2020
That's a good point – and as the first three films are all discussed about in the present tense it jars that something set afterwards is now in the past tense, so I've changed it to be in the present tense too. Are you happy with this now?
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