h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hiya Tav,

I've subbed your article at A87822336 <--- don't forget to subscribe!

If you'd like to read it through and OK it, I'll return it to the Eds.



GB

The photos have been applied now

GB

Thank you!

only got to finish the pics for the Ancient Races Entry now, only one missing.

I didn't read trhough this properly yet, never found the time because there's so much stuff to do in RL at the moment, I didn't think this would be published before I finish

Oh dear

I thought you were thanking me for the subbing in post 3. If, when you've read it through, you disagree with anything I can tweak it as a Curator.

The Introduction is on the FP today and we couldn't link to this part on an edited entry without this being edited as well. You could have asked for the Introduction to be delayed on the FP at Trello, where the publishings of the FP are notified in advance for a few weeks.

GB

ok, here it is in a hurry:

'The most remarkable feature of this fungus is that it is part of the body of the Orks – and more Orks and Getchin may grow from its spores – which can lie dormant on the surface of a planet for a long time.'
I think the - is misplaced here. The sentence makes not much sense this way. It should say that the spores can lie dormant for a long time, which it doesn't. The way it reads now the Orks lie dormant.
My original sentence was: 'The most remarkable feature of this fungus is that it is part even of the body of the Orks and from its spores more Orks and Getchin may grow from its spores - which can lie dormant on the surface of a planet for a long time.'

'Another race allied to the Tau are the flying vespids...'
Give the Vespids a capital V, please.

ok, that's it, not found anything else fortunately

Sorry, that was a misunderstanding it seems.

If I can get my pictures done today and BB uploads them tomorrow and they can be added it could be ok.

I fixed those requests this morning, I thought I had replied but it seems it never sent, sorry. I will add your photos as soon as I get the codes

GB

thank you!

the pictures for the Ancient Races Entry are:
WH40k_Ancient_Races_promo.jpg
WH40k_Necrons_promo.jpg
WH40k_Dark_Eldar_promo.jpg
WH40k_Eldar_promo.jpg

I added them this morning, posted at the Trello card but then I forgot to post heresorry

The photos look great!

thank you!

You are welcome

GB