h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hello
Sorry for being late with subbing your entry on Argyle, it´s now done and updated, but not sent off...
I changed very little in it as it was very well done anyway - the biggest change I remember is incorporating a footnote into mainline text!

Anyhow, please read this over, get back to me if it´s ok for returning or if you´d like me to change something and I´ll send it off as soon as we agree to be done with it
cheers ismarah who had flu

oops... it´s over here:
http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/alabaster/A904240

Ah! Don't worry - it's a bit of a complex one, this... just after it had been accepted I realised there was more that should go in there, so it's sort of been put on hold until I've added it in. Sam, one of the Italics just told me to add the bits and get back to him, although that was over a month ago now.

So I'm still working on the original version in my space.

The trouble is that I've added most of what I wanted to, but still have a section to put in, on Argyle's heroes and villains and what the fans chant - but I think the entry's now probably too long to sustain the casual reader's interest, and might have to be split in two: one on Argyle generally and one on the club's history.

I'd welcome any advice you have, if you fancy popping over and checking it out...

Cheers,
Number Six