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A822746 - Two poems about 9/11

Post 1

The last of the big time magnolia mouths

Entry: Two poems about 9/11 - A822746
Author: The last of the big time magnolia mouths - U201532

These are two poems about 9/11 one year on


A822746 - Two poems about 9/11

Post 2

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

I like poems with more thought than meter.
Good job.


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Post 3

a girl called Ben

I like these too, particularly the second one.

It is good to see word-play in poems which are not written in a standard form, and the repitition of the words is good. As the good Doctor said, 'more thought than meter' and these provoke plenty of thought.

Ben


A822746 - Two poems about 9/11

Post 4

a girl called Ben

Unfortunately it appears that The Last of the Bigtime Magnolia Mouths has left the building.

Damn! I particularly hate it when poets leave.

Ben


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Post 5

a girl called Ben

Not 'the good Doctor' but (tonsil revenge). Now why did I confuse you with Dr Montagu Trout, tr? smiley - grovel

Ben


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Post 6

The HitchHiker's Guide To The Galaxy Spaced Out Edition

these 2 great poems have been used in 2 spearate guide entries for the Spaced Out Guide. they can be found at A971138 and A971156.

smiley - bubbly


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Post 7

Tube - the being being back for the time being

Ok, discounted for the UG, then?


A822746 - Two poems about 9/11

Post 8

J

Nope smiley - smiley Spook can add everything he wants. It's not going to take away from the UG smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


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