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A2262485 - Being Hit by Car, Very painful!
UnderGuide Archivist - Visit The UnderGuide: A2112490 Started conversation Sep 11, 2004
Entry: Being Hit by Car, Very painful! - A2262485
Author: The Invisible Knight - U91587
Unburying this, it deserves a read.
A2262485 - Being Hit by Car, Very painful!
invisibleknight Posted Oct 15, 2004
oo, thank you!
I think i'm going to add an update addendum to this article.
yes, i am
A2262485 - Being Hit by Car, Very painful!
LL Waz Posted Oct 18, 2004
I like your addendum. It adds to the first bit, rounds it off without spoiling its immediacy.
That immediacy is one of the things I like about the original bit. It reads as though it had just happened, as if you'd written it while still in shock.
Waz
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