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A1310365 - So you want to be an injun?

Post 1

RAF Wing... Lookee I'm Invisible!!

Entry: So you want to be an injun? - A1310365
Author: RAF Wing... Lookee I'm Invisible!! - U213116

The tongue's in the cheek maybe on this but who would know? It's hard to talk when your tongue's pushing your cheek out on one side or the other so if anyone doesn't get it, that might be a credible explanation you know?


A1310365 - So you want to be an injun?

Post 2

J

This is really quite funny in its way. Some great jokes in it.

I think it works because you're willing to be conversational in it - you're writing in the first person. Not getting bogged down in too much heavy speech or long facts. I like that. I respect that.

smiley - blacksheep


A1310365 - So you want to be an injun?

Post 3

sprout

Yep I like this as well. The style is cool and there's some funny stuff (as well as some points) in it.

I don't know what inspired it but I like it.

Sprout


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