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A52328847 - Silver Apple
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Started conversation May 29, 2009
Entry: Silver Apple - A52328847
Author: dmitrigheorgheni - U1590784
When you read this, please remember where I come from...
And what happens when you ask hillbillies to tell stories.
My count makes it 1,485 words. (Thanks for the word limit: Longer would not have been better.)
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minorvogonpoet Posted May 30, 2009
This is an intriguing yarn - I think our narrator had drunk too many whiskies!
I think you could have done better. It doesn't have the psychological subtlety of, say, 'Guilty', or the clever plays on time and place of your science fiction.
But then, I'm miffed at not being able to identify the Yeats. I'll leave that to the cleverer folk round here.
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aka Bel - A87832164 Posted May 30, 2009
This is intriguing (and I don't mean the Yeats, I can't be bothered to try to find out which poem you are referring to).
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted May 30, 2009
Thanks for the reading, MVP - I'm sure the Yeats will come to you (and surprised at having stumped our most knowledgeable poetry person). It might, er, add a bit to the picture.
I'm disappointed that you don't find psychological subtlety here...
I was obviously going for depth psychology.
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minorvogonpoet Posted May 31, 2009
Were you thinking of 'The Song of Wandering Aengus', with its lines:
"Though I am old with wandering
Through hollow lands and hilly lands,
I will find out where she has gone,
And kiss her lips and take her hands;
And walk among long dappled grass,
And pluck till time and times are done
The silver apples of the mooon,
The golden apples of the sun."
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Danny B Posted May 31, 2009
What a lovely story
Bonus points from me for mentioning a) Sheffield; b) John Cleese; and c) bilingual punk-folk (the mind boggles...)
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jun 1, 2009
The bilingual folk.rock punk was a backyard-and-beach experiment, with guitar and bouzouki.
Thanks, Tib. So my alter ego is an unreliable narrator? Sounds about right...
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- 1: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 29, 2009)
- 2: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (May 29, 2009)
- 3: minorvogonpoet (May 30, 2009)
- 4: aka Bel - A87832164 (May 30, 2009)
- 5: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 30, 2009)
- 6: minorvogonpoet (May 31, 2009)
- 7: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 31, 2009)
- 8: Danny B (May 31, 2009)
- 9: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (May 31, 2009)
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