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A22305278 - Minivans

Post 1

Dudemeister

Entry: Minivans - A22305278
Author: Dudemeister - U53464

All about minivans - As observed from driver behaviour, at least in Canada, and assuming this must be due to the vehicles design. Perhaps adding some history of this type of vehicles development, marketing history and other facts to this would make a good Guide Entry?


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Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - roflsmiley - roflsmiley - rofl

Very insightful.

A excellent description of the functioning of the urban assault vehicle.

(Keep it away from the EG, those guys will take out all the jokes.smiley - winkeye)


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Post 3

minorvogonpoet

smiley - biggrin Are they related to the White Vans that are a menace on UK roads?


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Post 4

Dudemeister

That should be suburban assault vehicle.

I thought with some fact around this the "jokes" i.e. the behaviour of the drivers of these things could be stuck in wihtout getting too far from reality to be a guide entry.

I remember contributing years ago to article on driving around the world - like in Paris. Not too far off from this (although that was pre-BBC days, if it makes a difference)


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Post 5

U1250369


I like the stickers smiley - smiley


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Post 6

Tibley Bobley

>>Seats nine adults comfortably<<

Is it like the British mini? It used to be said that they'd accommodate 3 adult elephants - mashed up.

I enjoyed reading that. Thank yousmiley - smiley


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Post 7

minichessemouse - Ahoy there me barnacle!

i am impressed. it is a really original idea. well done i enjoyed that. smiley - smileysmiley - smiley


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Post 8

UnderGuide Editors

Hello Dudemeister smiley - smiley.

The UnderGuide miners have picked your Minivans entry for the Underguide. Congratulations smiley - bubbly.

The QA verdict was that it was cleverly written and heartfelt. It could be improved by more variation - a less repetitive style and some change of pace and a clear finishing off of the piece, but it is of UnderGuide quality.

A polisher will be round shortly to send Minivans off to the front page and more readers.
Well done,
UGeds


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