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A22305278 - Minivans
Dudemeister Started conversation Sep 8, 2007
Entry: Minivans - A22305278
Author: Dudemeister - U53464
All about minivans - As observed from driver behaviour, at least in Canada, and assuming this must be due to the vehicles design. Perhaps adding some history of this type of vehicles development, marketing history and other facts to this would make a good Guide Entry?
A22305278 - Minivans
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Sep 8, 2007
Very insightful.
A excellent description of the functioning of the urban assault vehicle.
(Keep it away from the EG, those guys will take out all the jokes.)
A22305278 - Minivans
Dudemeister Posted Sep 8, 2007
That should be suburban assault vehicle.
I thought with some fact around this the "jokes" i.e. the behaviour of the drivers of these things could be stuck in wihtout getting too far from reality to be a guide entry.
I remember contributing years ago to article on driving around the world - like in Paris. Not too far off from this (although that was pre-BBC days, if it makes a difference)
A22305278 - Minivans
Tibley Bobley Posted Sep 23, 2007
>>Seats nine adults comfortably<<
Is it like the British mini? It used to be said that they'd accommodate 3 adult elephants - mashed up.
I enjoyed reading that. Thank you
A22305278 - Minivans
UnderGuide Editors Posted Oct 29, 2008
Hello Dudemeister .
The UnderGuide miners have picked your Minivans entry for the Underguide. Congratulations .
The QA verdict was that it was cleverly written and heartfelt. It could be improved by more variation - a less repetitive style and some change of pace and a clear finishing off of the piece, but it is of UnderGuide quality.
A polisher will be round shortly to send Minivans off to the front page and more readers.
Well done,
UGeds
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