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Entry: The Peasants Revolt The Shadow Of 1381 - A20019584
Author: Bob Stafford (Keeper of The Treacle Shadow) - U3151547

Hi Elentari, all linked in it is a very good entry

Hello Bob
Just a few typos and house-style to take care of:

pre plague rates.,
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pre-plague rates,

she had lead
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she had led

title from the marrage
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marriage

On Thursday the 30 of May 1381
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On Thursday 30 May, 1381

the unrest in England
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The unrest in England

On Saturday the 1 of June.
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On Saturday 1 June.

Wednesday the 5 of June
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Wednesday 5 June


All the rest of your dates, please make them house-style, Bob

because it was a possesion
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possession

origanaly
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originally

influenial
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influential

The Tower of London was taked
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taken

Gouvernment
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Government

Romans in Britian
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Britain

un punished
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unpunished

Good work Bob

Hi Galaxy Babe.
All done thenks for the help

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Bob

Thank you Galaxy Babe and laconian for your support and help.



Bob...

Hi Bob - I've finished Subbing your Entry - see A20961164

Let me know if it's ok or not and then I'll send it off to the Eds

Alex
<./>SubEditor</.>

Hi Alex good job as usual thank you.
Maybe just one thing.

passed through. The drop in >available< peasant labour led to a rise in wages paid

What do you think, at least I read your work.


Bob...

My work? It's your work...

I've made that change - is the rest ok?

A1 thank you all very good.

Bob...

Off it goes