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Peer Review: A821882 - Brian Dewan
Ramsey E. Started conversation Sep 6, 2002
Entry: Brian Dewan - A821882
Author: Ramsey E. - U196579
Well, I got such a wonderful response from the last one I thought I'd try my hand at a different topic. Pick those nits away, reviewers!
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Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) Posted Sep 28, 2002
One rather large and gruesome nit. Unfortunately, articles for the Edited Guide must be in the third person. This sentence bollixes it up for the rest of the article: 'Well, I'll tell you who Brian Dewan is.'
The rest of the problems are minor - there needs to be a bit more biographical information about Brian Dewan - where was he born, etc. When editing this in Guide ML, put an extra after your paragraphs - it'll make the space between headers more comfy.
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Z Posted Oct 13, 2002
Or you could just put a and tag around each of the paragraphs. This would also make it more nicely spaced out.
Do let us know when you've made the changes. 
Z
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Dec 4, 2002
Nothing on h2g2 from the author since his last posting in this thread 
I think a move to the FM might be a good idea 
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Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) Posted Dec 5, 2002
With the editing out of the first person reference, this article would be ready to go... I hate to send it to the bin if it's a little thing like that.
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Dec 5, 2002
True, there's only one first person reference, but the entry isn't exactly balanced, and I'm not sure that Ramsey has made any changes to it since it was submitted.
I was a little previous in suggesting a move anyway - there's another week or two before the two month anniversary of the author's last posting, so let's leave it alone until then and see if he returns
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Dec 31, 2002
It is in GuideML now but the single 1st person sentence is still there. Balance - I can't tell.
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Dec 31, 2002
I think it's time to repeat my suggestion of a move to the FM
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jan 2, 2003
Ok then... will be moved soon
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Trout Montague Posted Jan 7, 2003
Original Entry A821882
Original Author U196579
Other Contributors U144292U185843
PR Thread F98175?thread=207829&latest=1
Flea-Market Thread F74125?thread=235351
New Entry A920143
New PR Thread F48874?thread=235753
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Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) Posted Jan 10, 2003
What's up, Doc!
Just wanted to mention that I'm not a researcher for this article. (I'm listed in the entry)
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Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) Posted Jan 12, 2003
Cool. My name is no longer in the author list, but it's still in my list of entries I've created on my home page, which just ain't right. If an official text-tweaker could fix that for me, I'd much appreciate it.
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Trout Montague Posted Jan 17, 2003
Can't help with the technical stuff I'm afraid.
But if you'd just like to apply your scout badge here ...
F48874?thread=235753
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Peer Review: A821882 - Brian Dewan
- 1: Ramsey E. (Sep 6, 2002)
- 2: Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) (Sep 28, 2002)
- 3: Ramsey E. (Oct 13, 2002)
- 4: Z (Oct 13, 2002)
- 5: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Dec 4, 2002)
- 6: Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) (Dec 5, 2002)
- 7: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Dec 5, 2002)
- 8: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Dec 31, 2002)
- 9: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Dec 31, 2002)
- 10: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Jan 2, 2003)
- 11: Trout Montague (Jan 7, 2003)
- 12: Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) (Jan 10, 2003)
- 13: Lentilla (Keeper of Non-Sequiturs) (Jan 12, 2003)
- 14: Trout Montague (Jan 17, 2003)
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