h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Ripon, Wisconsin, USA - A810703
Author: EggsER - U199587

If you come from Ripon England I'd love to talk. Small World, isn't it.

Looks like a good entry.

Edited entries a generally written in the third person. I only mention this because I noticed a couple of first person references.

Apart from that, pretty good!

Very enjoyable reading.

However, for it to go into the Edited Guide, you'll need to clarify a few of the things that you weren't sure of at the time you wrote it.

Fixing stuff like:
"Ripon College is a small Liberal Arts college founded by a religous organization (can't remember if is was Presbyterian or what)."

But this is a great start to an interesting entry!


- Jimi X

Thanks for the response and suggestions on both my entries. Will get the research done asap. Will add in some current description. Wish this had spell check, I am notorious for crazy spelling.

Is there any progress on this EggsER if you have decieded to leave things for a while then could you please remove the entry from PR. Click on the link to PR look for you entry in the list and then click on remove next to it! there simple!

If the progress is going to take some time then maybe you could remove it until it's ready.

I do hope you'll be able to keep at it though
Z

Just so you know, I have been recuperating from some nasty surgery and did not get this message until now. I have tried several times this morning to remove this and another entry from Peer Review and there is no remove link to be clicked upon, that I can find. I will keep trying.

Oh I'm sorry I hope you're back on you're feet soon enough. just to say that the remove button is on the page of PR where your entry is, it's on the very far right of hte screen next to the line refereing to your entry. I have handliey made a guide to doing just this you can look at it here - A849189