A Conversation for The Air Guitar.

Peer Review: A764750 - The Air Guitar.

Post 1

Mike

Entry: The Air Guitar. - A764750
Author: Mike - U196045

A first attempt at writing for the guide and hopefully a good one, I await the comments of others .. watch this space!


A764750 - The Air Guitar.

Post 2

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


Hi Mike!

Welcome to H2G2!

There's already an edited guide entry on Air Guitars at A88319 , written by none other than Mr Mark Moxon, our glorious leader, back in June 1999. It's well worth entering the topic you want to write about in the "search" box at the top of the page before starting your research, to make sure you're not duplicating what's already been done.

In this case, however, I think the guide entry needs updating, and I think you might just be the person to do it! Entry updating is the current buzzphrase round here, so I'm fairly sure you'll get some support on this. I think what both entries need adding is something about the World Air guitar championship, which I know exists, but know nothing about. Perhaps this is something that you could research! The update HQ is at A496451.

A general point - edited guide entries are always written in the third person (ie not using "I" or "my" or "our"). This is often one of the most difficult things for new researchers to get their head )or heads) around.

So I suggest a collaborative update might be the way forward. What does everyone else think?

Otto


Thanks for the tip.

Post 3

Mike

Hi Otto. Thanks for the tip, originality was not something that I considered for my article. I think next time I'll look into some of the writing workshops on offer here at h2g2 as well. Could be a long road to getting an entry in the edited guide .. who knows?

Thanks again, ta tar, Mike.


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Post 4

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Hey there Mike -- would you be willing to remove this from Peer Review now, since it's no longer up for consideration?

thanks
smiley - smiley
Mikey


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Post 5

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


He doesn't appear to be around any more. Any seconders for a return to the original entry?

Otto


Thanks for the tip.

Post 6

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

2nd.


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