h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

A thread for fanfic and discussion thereof to be had....

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I have story like Doctor Who, abuot a little old man and his student, travelling outside space.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/A40046609

Check my PS for the few that I've written, or check my Live Journal space for those that are X rated and not allowed to be published here

Look what I made!!



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Actually I found it.

A needle??

Hey Reefgirl, I'm feeling very blonde today. Could you give me a nice easy link right into your stories?

http://reefgirluk.livejournal.com/tag/dr+who+fics is for the Dr Who ones

http://reefgirluk.livejournal.com/tag/torchwood+fics is for the Torchwood ones

Please, please read the ratings and warnings before you read, some of them are X rated

Lush.
I shall look forward to those!

You're welcome

My story about the boy and the old man, could you tell me how good it is.

I'll let you know when it's finished

Tell me about my new Children of the Stones-inspired story, The Night Stonehenge.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/A40364930

It's very disjointed, it seems to be just a bunch of sentances put together, there's no plot and no storyline, no insight on how the characters came to be together, no background story and no flow. It seems to me you've just put a load of random ideas down on paper and called it a story and they way it's written is very offputting, all those gaps between the lines makes it difficult to read.

You did ask, sorry.

I agree with myself, but did you think the Time Travellers was good?

It's not finished is it?

Actually, it's open-ended.

Is it the first link you posted in this thread?

the frst, yep. short and sweet.

Too short, it has a beginning and an end but no middle, It's like you had the story all worked out but couldn't be assed to write it, there's no story, it's a load of sentences strung together

I've updated it.