A Conversation for The All-New H2G2 Poetry Appreciation Service

a poem on cheese

Post 1

mctrmt...

cheese, cheese
oh how i love it
it's the food i love the best
cheese, cheese
i'll eat some of it
and then i'll eat the rest


thankyouverymuch


a poem on cheese

Post 2

The Artist formerly known as Hullabaloo


Absolutely wonderfulsmiley - wow, greatsmiley - ok and magicalsmiley - magic. Such a wealth of feeling, such an avalanche of intensity! Reminiscent of Pound (soon to be Euro?) at his deepest and most penetrating! smiley - ok Such intelligence! Such profound understanding of life's partiality (especially to cheese) and life's wholeness!smiley - magic

Folks, we have a real genius, a real AUThor in our midst!smiley - ok

I really loved this, and the thankyouverymuch was marvelous. Keep it in, it adds to the poem and rounds it off beautifully, (but you know already, cos you're so goodsmiley - ok).


Admiringly,


Hullabaloo, Poet and Tragedian smiley - artist




a poem on cheese

Post 3

Hoosier

I totally agree, how wonderful to see a poem as lovely as some cheese. The style of prose reminds me slightly of e.e. cummings with a little of Andy Kaufman thrown in for good measure. You must keep in the thankyouverymuch.


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